Thursday, November 13, 2008

What's the name of this story- Chapter 8

Chapter 8
Madeline sat in her dark room. This was not what a princess was meant to do for her nation. A true princess was meant to stand up and fight for her nation, not be trapped in a tiny cave under her bed. She had to get out of here. But how?
‘Jack…’
No. Not Jack. Even if he is good I will never trust him. No never. He is just another slave of the wicked Angela. He cannot be trusted.
‘Use him…’
NO! I cannot use him, I cannot use him to my advantage.
‘It’s your only way out. Come on Madeline, what’s a pretty girl like you got to do? Just blink those pretty eyelashes of yours at him and he’ll be all over you’
Madeline sighed. No a princess could not be player. But to save her life and those of her nation? And what about Captain Fish?
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“Hand over your money now or bye bye to your beautiful baby girl,” Valeria said holding a little baby in her arms and a man pleading on his knees.
“Take this its all I have,” The man handed over some cash and Valeria was gone in a blink of an eye. She sat on a rooftop counting the amount of money she had just earned. ‘Damn bastard only had $120. Oh well it’ll get something nice to eat’
She lied down on the roof staring at the light shining from the world above. Through the much water in the ocean she could half make out the moon. Pityful white object hanging in the sky. ‘You’re pretty pitiful too you know…’
Shut up stupid brain. That changed her train of thought again, back to what had happened the other day with Chase. That damn c***. She hated him so much she would kill him the moment she saw him.
‘No you wouldn’t…”
Of course I would!
‘Well you WERE given the chance’
Grr.. Wow she really was going mental. She was arguing with her own bloody conscience. She jumped off the roof and went to fetch herself some food. As she came out of the cafĂ©, stuffing her face with the jam donut, she bumped into an unknown figure. “Hello I am Shelly fishman..other wise known as Shellfish...its nice to finally meet you Valeria.”
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Chase was back to his normal self again and he didn’t like it one bit. Now he was worrying about Lisa. The poor girl which if he hadn’t set guards to look after her would probably have killed herself by now.
Chase walked over to Lisa’s room. The guards bowed and stepped aside and let Chase enter the room. There lay Lisa on the floor, passed out. “Oh no!” He ran to her and held her in his harm. “Lisa wake up! Lisa. Lisa!!! Can you hear me Lisa?! Say something!” Lisa made a soft noise and Chase hugged her tighter. ‘WTF ARE YOU DOING,’ Chase asked himself. Lisa woke up and stared at the concerned face looking at her. After regaining her full conscience she gasped and sat up. “Chase?!”
“I—I just came to check up on you..and uh .. you were on the floor…” ‘Stop stumbling on your words!’ “And I thought something might be wrong so I just picked you up and was about to take you to a doctor…”
“No I’m fine just felt dizzy.”
“Ok, then I will leave you to rest now. I will ask one of the servants to send you something to eat.” Chase got up and walked towards the door.
“Chase! Wait!”
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Jack entered the cave. “Angela sent me to check on you,” he said in a calm, emotionless voice.
“I am sorry.” Madeline said.
“Huh?”
“About yesterday, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to call you a-–-a….”
“Monster?”
“Yes I’m sorry.”
“It’s ok. I get that from a lot of people around here.” A gentle smile lit his face.
“I want to leave. I want to leave this place with you.” She stopped and thought about this one more time, “I want to leave and be with you..”
You could see the excitement and happiness in Jack’s face. He held her close and closed his eyes. His hands tangled in her hair. “Don’t worry. I promise I’ll get you out of here.”
Tears started to form in Madeline’s eyes but she blinked them away.

Well chapter 8 for you! Enjoy! And thanks for all the comments! LOVE YOUALL!

4 comments:

  1. Aww still no Astaroche. Good story :) good job! :D

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  2. lol comment in the comment box! Astaroche is coming soon!

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  3. You are getting better Zuzu~ You gots quite the imagination :3. I can't wait to see what you do with Astaroché, a name I created -cough-. roflrofl <333

    Good luck, my dear!

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  4. yay! im glad ur liking it :D

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