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Monday, December 22, 2008
Thursday, December 18, 2008
What's the name of this story? Chapter 19
Chapter 19- Just missed her
New Character introduced! Jessica-lifesizelaila
Jack had given her water and tried to make her eat something but she had passed out. He sat there just looking at her. Her beautiful green hair sprawled out around her. He wished she would open those green eyes of hers, those eyes that were green as the grass when she smiled. He had fallen asleep sitting like that until she stirred in her sleep and began to wake up.
She gained conscience and found those two unique brown eyes staring down at her. His brown eyes staring down at her.
He ran a hand over her face. “How are you feeling?”
She didn’t say a word. ‘Yeah she’s mad at you alright,’ Jack thought.
“I am so so sorry. I swear on my life the only thing I had planned that evening was our escape. Everything else was incidental. Please, Please forgive me. I am so sorry.” She was still lying in his laps but he was now hugging her, his face against hers.
“Don’t touch me,” Madeline said.
“I said I’m sorry. I didn’t plan it… I didn’t plan anything. Please I’m telling the truth,”
She looked at him. Captain Jack…the fearless knight of Angela’s was looking like his soul had been ripped from him. He stared desperately at her with tears at the back of his eyes. She couldn’t see the tears but she could smell them.
She rested into her place, “I don’t know why…but for some reason I believe you…” She said and dozed off to sleep.
………………………………
Jez read the wanted sign on the board. ‘Haha that’s a whopper prize on this so called mutiny.’ She read on, ‘ I see Princess Madeline has issued it herself. Princess Madeline my ass I know she’s that pirate bitch. Need to see her…’
……………………………..
Angela played around with her swords when she was interrupted by a guard. “Your majesty. A woman has come to the castle claiming she can find the Mutiny and would like to speak in person with you. What should I tell her?”
“You may let her in…”
A few seconds later a young brunette with short hair and a rather smug look walked in the room. “Nice place you got here…”
“Please get to the point. I don’t like stray conversations”
“Yeah well you put up a poster on the wanted board. The mutiny..eh? I can chase them down no problem. No criminal gotten past me before,”
“First of all you will refer to me as your majesty or Princess Madeline…”
“Your no princess I know exactly who you are…You see I have a nose for criminals.”
Angela smirked. “I see that you do. So tell me why have you come here. The reward I have put up not good enough for someone like you?”
“Your right now target. You see I don’t work for the average amount of cash. I work fast and hard and I expect that kind of money..ya know?”
“What kind of money do you want? Any money will do as long as you find them and report to me their location.”
“Any sum of money?”
“Any some of money.”
“Well get that blank cheque ready cuz these mutiny freaks will be on you doorstep A-S-A-P.”
“I should hope so…”
……………………………………
Nate stared at the piece of paper with fury.
Dear William, Yuffie, Nate, Valeria, Em, James and Astaroche,
After long hours of thinking about it, I think I have finally figured it out. I am not one of the mutiny and therefore I cant stay with you guys any longer. I hope you understand. Please take care and remember everything I have taught you from my time around, you’ll need it.
Lots of Love,
Minona
How could she fucking do that? ‘Dammit cuz it was my own damn fault!’ He thought. Now she’s gone. He just didn’t think that Mimi would take their fights that seriously. But now he wasn’t going to go look for her. No. She thinks she can run off well my ass she can. She can kill herself for all I care. That bitch for taking off on the mutiny. But then his inner Nate took over and he started blaming himself. Astaroche walked into his room and put a hand to his shoulder. “Nate honey. Now that Mimi’s gone everyone needs you. Mimi was the leader but now we need someone to keep the team together. That’s you Nate! Come on lets go outside…”
They walked out together but as they walked Nate remembered Mimi and his last encounter.
He held her hands tight. She was pinned again a wall, struggling to break free.
“Nate! Fucking let go of me!”
“No! Tell me you love me!”
“No!” He held her harder digging his nails into her skin so that one of her hands started bleeding.
“Ouch! You Bastard let go of me!” She kicked him away and looked at him with irritation.
“How many times do I have to tell you its over. I don’t love you and you don’t love me. I know it!”
“I do love you!”
“Nate please hear me out,”
He calmed down and nodded at her approvingly to continue. “Nate I’ve seen the way you look at Astaroche.”
“I don’t-“
“Please..”
“Okay”
“I know you love her. You loved her enough to let go of me in the first. Nate, I know what you did was wrong..To leave me like that and now you have realized it. But that doesn’t mean you have to cling to me. You don’t have to love me because I know you don’t. Please I know you will understand..”
“But-“
“Look I’m tired. We’ll talk later, maybe.”
“I’m sorry. I’m sorry about your hand, everything.”
“I know..”He was knocked into reality when he nearly tripped over a fallen branch. He came and sat down around the seafire, 6 colourless faces staring at him.
“She’s gone and we have to get over it…” Nate said. He looked at William.
“William I want you to lead us.”
“Me but why? Why not you?” William asked.
“I think you are more fitting for the role in these circumstances.”
“OK but if I screw you guys up im not taking the blame,” William joked.
Nate managed the smile and everyone’s face lit up at that. They sat around the fire for a while just talking about random things until they heard the roaring of an engine.
Nate saw a motorbike approaching and they automatically got to their feet and had their defences up.
Rage jumped off his bike and took his helmet off to see 7 people looking like they were gonna attack him any second. ‘Amateurs..’ He thought. When Nate saw who it was. He told him to lower their guard.
Rage walked in to the bundle and saw a couple of girls blushing and the guys staring at him with questionable faces.
“Well you all looked surprised…”
“We are. What bring you here?”
“Oh what brings me to the geek squad?”
Eminence and Valeria giggled at that. Rage looked at them and then looked back at Nate.
“Felt like it was time for a visit…”
“Your timings as pathetic as ever”
Rage knew something was wrong. He looked around and saw that Mimi wasn’t insight. “Where’s Mimi?”
Everyone’s smiles disappeared. “You just missed her,” Nate said.
New Character introduced! Jessica-lifesizelaila
Jack had given her water and tried to make her eat something but she had passed out. He sat there just looking at her. Her beautiful green hair sprawled out around her. He wished she would open those green eyes of hers, those eyes that were green as the grass when she smiled. He had fallen asleep sitting like that until she stirred in her sleep and began to wake up.
She gained conscience and found those two unique brown eyes staring down at her. His brown eyes staring down at her.
He ran a hand over her face. “How are you feeling?”
She didn’t say a word. ‘Yeah she’s mad at you alright,’ Jack thought.
“I am so so sorry. I swear on my life the only thing I had planned that evening was our escape. Everything else was incidental. Please, Please forgive me. I am so sorry.” She was still lying in his laps but he was now hugging her, his face against hers.
“Don’t touch me,” Madeline said.
“I said I’m sorry. I didn’t plan it… I didn’t plan anything. Please I’m telling the truth,”
She looked at him. Captain Jack…the fearless knight of Angela’s was looking like his soul had been ripped from him. He stared desperately at her with tears at the back of his eyes. She couldn’t see the tears but she could smell them.
She rested into her place, “I don’t know why…but for some reason I believe you…” She said and dozed off to sleep.
………………………………
Jez read the wanted sign on the board. ‘Haha that’s a whopper prize on this so called mutiny.’ She read on, ‘ I see Princess Madeline has issued it herself. Princess Madeline my ass I know she’s that pirate bitch. Need to see her…’
……………………………..
Angela played around with her swords when she was interrupted by a guard. “Your majesty. A woman has come to the castle claiming she can find the Mutiny and would like to speak in person with you. What should I tell her?”
“You may let her in…”
A few seconds later a young brunette with short hair and a rather smug look walked in the room. “Nice place you got here…”
“Please get to the point. I don’t like stray conversations”
“Yeah well you put up a poster on the wanted board. The mutiny..eh? I can chase them down no problem. No criminal gotten past me before,”
“First of all you will refer to me as your majesty or Princess Madeline…”
“Your no princess I know exactly who you are…You see I have a nose for criminals.”
Angela smirked. “I see that you do. So tell me why have you come here. The reward I have put up not good enough for someone like you?”
“Your right now target. You see I don’t work for the average amount of cash. I work fast and hard and I expect that kind of money..ya know?”
“What kind of money do you want? Any money will do as long as you find them and report to me their location.”
“Any sum of money?”
“Any some of money.”
“Well get that blank cheque ready cuz these mutiny freaks will be on you doorstep A-S-A-P.”
“I should hope so…”
……………………………………
Nate stared at the piece of paper with fury.
Dear William, Yuffie, Nate, Valeria, Em, James and Astaroche,
After long hours of thinking about it, I think I have finally figured it out. I am not one of the mutiny and therefore I cant stay with you guys any longer. I hope you understand. Please take care and remember everything I have taught you from my time around, you’ll need it.
Lots of Love,
Minona
How could she fucking do that? ‘Dammit cuz it was my own damn fault!’ He thought. Now she’s gone. He just didn’t think that Mimi would take their fights that seriously. But now he wasn’t going to go look for her. No. She thinks she can run off well my ass she can. She can kill herself for all I care. That bitch for taking off on the mutiny. But then his inner Nate took over and he started blaming himself. Astaroche walked into his room and put a hand to his shoulder. “Nate honey. Now that Mimi’s gone everyone needs you. Mimi was the leader but now we need someone to keep the team together. That’s you Nate! Come on lets go outside…”
They walked out together but as they walked Nate remembered Mimi and his last encounter.
He held her hands tight. She was pinned again a wall, struggling to break free.
“Nate! Fucking let go of me!”
“No! Tell me you love me!”
“No!” He held her harder digging his nails into her skin so that one of her hands started bleeding.
“Ouch! You Bastard let go of me!” She kicked him away and looked at him with irritation.
“How many times do I have to tell you its over. I don’t love you and you don’t love me. I know it!”
“I do love you!”
“Nate please hear me out,”
He calmed down and nodded at her approvingly to continue. “Nate I’ve seen the way you look at Astaroche.”
“I don’t-“
“Please..”
“Okay”
“I know you love her. You loved her enough to let go of me in the first. Nate, I know what you did was wrong..To leave me like that and now you have realized it. But that doesn’t mean you have to cling to me. You don’t have to love me because I know you don’t. Please I know you will understand..”
“But-“
“Look I’m tired. We’ll talk later, maybe.”
“I’m sorry. I’m sorry about your hand, everything.”
“I know..”He was knocked into reality when he nearly tripped over a fallen branch. He came and sat down around the seafire, 6 colourless faces staring at him.
“She’s gone and we have to get over it…” Nate said. He looked at William.
“William I want you to lead us.”
“Me but why? Why not you?” William asked.
“I think you are more fitting for the role in these circumstances.”
“OK but if I screw you guys up im not taking the blame,” William joked.
Nate managed the smile and everyone’s face lit up at that. They sat around the fire for a while just talking about random things until they heard the roaring of an engine.
Nate saw a motorbike approaching and they automatically got to their feet and had their defences up.
Rage jumped off his bike and took his helmet off to see 7 people looking like they were gonna attack him any second. ‘Amateurs..’ He thought. When Nate saw who it was. He told him to lower their guard.
Rage walked in to the bundle and saw a couple of girls blushing and the guys staring at him with questionable faces.
“Well you all looked surprised…”
“We are. What bring you here?”
“Oh what brings me to the geek squad?”
Eminence and Valeria giggled at that. Rage looked at them and then looked back at Nate.
“Felt like it was time for a visit…”
“Your timings as pathetic as ever”
Rage knew something was wrong. He looked around and saw that Mimi wasn’t insight. “Where’s Mimi?”
Everyone’s smiles disappeared. “You just missed her,” Nate said.
Wednesday, December 17, 2008
What's the name of this story? Chapter 18
Chapter 18- The odd one out
Jack walked out of the medlab. ‘Shit who can do such a thing? And why attack Pange out of all people?’ Angela said that they had a chat about an attack on Squidaria and she left then the next hing they find her bleeding to death. Dammit this is all my fault now she’s in a comma with a 50/50 chance of making it. Jack decided it was finally time to face up to Madeline. Crap what would she think of him?
Jack used his ID and entered her new prison. Surprisingly it was the room right next to the throne room. Angela and her wacky ways to imprison people… He walked in and saw Madeline. His id fell to the floor as he saw her pale face, her hands and feet cuffed to the wall so he was hanging in the air. Why hadn’t he come earlier. WHY? He ran to her.
She couldn’t open her eyes. She didn’t have the strength but she knew that scent… it was his scent. She didn’t want to talk to him and for a second she was glad she didn’t have the energy to look at him. He grabbed the keys in his pocket and unlocked her cuffs at once. She was unstable and fell but Jack caught her in his arms. He sat down, Madeline lying in his arms and sprawled across his lap.
She made a soft noise. “I’m here, Madeline. Shhhh. I’m here” He brought his face to hers and rested it there.
…………………………………
Chase had gotten back from his last war successful two days ago. Lisa was concerned. During those two days he hadn’t once come to see her. Lisa paced to his room. Why? What was going on?
She opened the door and walked in on a Chase thoroughly indulged in a book. “Chase?”
He lifted his head and was surprised to see Lisa. Not really he had been avoiding Lisa for a while with no good reason or perhaps a reason he couldn’t define?
“Where were you?” Lisa asked.
“I- I was..” He was speechless, King Chase the conquerer was speechless! Damn you say something to the girl!
“I don’t know,” Great going Einstein.
“What do you mean you don’t know?!” What’s he doing? Playing with her? I’m not in the mood..
“I’m sorry. Just things in my head I need to clear out.”
Lisa tried to look at this from his point of view, trying to be understanding. Chase held out his arms and Lisa walked into them. They stood there for what seemed like hours in utter silence. She broke apart and looked at him.
“Chase do you love me?”
The was no response from him. ‘Seriously is it that hard for him to bloody answer. Yes or No! She would prefer the former but anything just say anything!’
“I don’t know…”
“What do you mean you—“ She was cut of by his deep kiss.
“I just don’t know yet…” There was something inside him. Something keeping him.
………………………………………
Mimi looked at the sheet of paper and sighed. She had made her decision. She wasn’t one of them…She just wasn’t. Her conscience spoke to her, *Are you really not one of them?*
‘Yeah I’m not. Why you think otherwise?’
*It might be that you’re the leader and you’re abandoning them. Some leader you turned out to be*
‘It wasn’t me. Shellfish said that I was one of them’
*So little innocent Mimi always does what she is told?*
‘Hey who’s fukin side are you on?’
*I’m the disagreeing conscience what do you think brainiac?*
She sighed and got up. No this was it. She looked at her farewell note once more And left it on the table. She had done everything she would to help. Even Nate seemed happy these days with Astaroche’s company. William had Yuffie. Eminence had James. Everyone was happy. She was the odd one out and once she left the mutiny would be real. She jumped out of the window and grabbed the first vehicle she saw and drove off.
Jack walked out of the medlab. ‘Shit who can do such a thing? And why attack Pange out of all people?’ Angela said that they had a chat about an attack on Squidaria and she left then the next hing they find her bleeding to death. Dammit this is all my fault now she’s in a comma with a 50/50 chance of making it. Jack decided it was finally time to face up to Madeline. Crap what would she think of him?
Jack used his ID and entered her new prison. Surprisingly it was the room right next to the throne room. Angela and her wacky ways to imprison people… He walked in and saw Madeline. His id fell to the floor as he saw her pale face, her hands and feet cuffed to the wall so he was hanging in the air. Why hadn’t he come earlier. WHY? He ran to her.
She couldn’t open her eyes. She didn’t have the strength but she knew that scent… it was his scent. She didn’t want to talk to him and for a second she was glad she didn’t have the energy to look at him. He grabbed the keys in his pocket and unlocked her cuffs at once. She was unstable and fell but Jack caught her in his arms. He sat down, Madeline lying in his arms and sprawled across his lap.
She made a soft noise. “I’m here, Madeline. Shhhh. I’m here” He brought his face to hers and rested it there.
…………………………………
Chase had gotten back from his last war successful two days ago. Lisa was concerned. During those two days he hadn’t once come to see her. Lisa paced to his room. Why? What was going on?
She opened the door and walked in on a Chase thoroughly indulged in a book. “Chase?”
He lifted his head and was surprised to see Lisa. Not really he had been avoiding Lisa for a while with no good reason or perhaps a reason he couldn’t define?
“Where were you?” Lisa asked.
“I- I was..” He was speechless, King Chase the conquerer was speechless! Damn you say something to the girl!
“I don’t know,” Great going Einstein.
“What do you mean you don’t know?!” What’s he doing? Playing with her? I’m not in the mood..
“I’m sorry. Just things in my head I need to clear out.”
Lisa tried to look at this from his point of view, trying to be understanding. Chase held out his arms and Lisa walked into them. They stood there for what seemed like hours in utter silence. She broke apart and looked at him.
“Chase do you love me?”
The was no response from him. ‘Seriously is it that hard for him to bloody answer. Yes or No! She would prefer the former but anything just say anything!’
“I don’t know…”
“What do you mean you—“ She was cut of by his deep kiss.
“I just don’t know yet…” There was something inside him. Something keeping him.
………………………………………
Mimi looked at the sheet of paper and sighed. She had made her decision. She wasn’t one of them…She just wasn’t. Her conscience spoke to her, *Are you really not one of them?*
‘Yeah I’m not. Why you think otherwise?’
*It might be that you’re the leader and you’re abandoning them. Some leader you turned out to be*
‘It wasn’t me. Shellfish said that I was one of them’
*So little innocent Mimi always does what she is told?*
‘Hey who’s fukin side are you on?’
*I’m the disagreeing conscience what do you think brainiac?*
She sighed and got up. No this was it. She looked at her farewell note once more And left it on the table. She had done everything she would to help. Even Nate seemed happy these days with Astaroche’s company. William had Yuffie. Eminence had James. Everyone was happy. She was the odd one out and once she left the mutiny would be real. She jumped out of the window and grabbed the first vehicle she saw and drove off.
Sunday, December 14, 2008
What's the name of this story- Chapter 17
Chapter 17- (Part 2) Lovers fatal arrow
Mimi sat on her bed and stared at the two movie tickets in her hand. What was she to do with them and who had put it in her bag? She thought about her options. Give it to Nate and Yuffie and they’d go enjoy a good movie together well that will get them out of the house at least. She didn’t particularily enjoy being the intruder in their makeout sessions, which by the way never ended. ‘Hmm how about Eminence?’
She thought about that for a moment. ‘What about Eminence and James? They looked cute together but they didn’t give off the girlfriend-boyfriend vibe. Ahh who cares just give it to her she’ll figure something out.’ She stared at the tickets again. It was a soppy love drama movie. ‘Yuck,’ She thought.
………………………….......
Mimi walked over to Eminence. “Hey Ems. Look I got these tickets and I dunno wat to do with em’. Do you want them?”
“Uhh Ok!” She said with a cheery smile. She streamed through her possibilities. She could go with another girl in the group or she could pick James…But she didn’t know whether he would want to go. She looked at the ticket and when she saw it was a love movie she made a weird facial expression. Mimi assumed that it was her way of showing dislike. Mimi grinned. “I’ll leave you to your thinking then,” she said with a wide grin followed by a wink. Eminence remembered where she was and that she just stood there for 2 minutes dreaming about going to the movies with James. She wanted to kick herself. Mimi laughed, “K ill see ya later,”
“Bye Bye” Eminence said and returned to her daydreaming.
…………………………………
Jack paced back and forth in his bedroom. ‘What do I do now? Leave a sweet, innocent girl in prison and let her believe that you’re evil or face a bloodthirsty homicidal maniac and tell her you don’t love her.’ He then had a vision of her sucking his blood and his hand came to his neck. ‘That’s a slightly horrifiying thought. Just then Pange walked into the room with a huge grin on her face.
Jack looked up. ‘What’s she got to grin about? Dammit im not in the mood…’
She giggled in her usual flirty way, “Hey Jack,”
“Hey,”
She walked closer to him and without any consent put her arms around his neck. “Our last meeting was a little bit interrupted wasn’t it?”
“Umm…”
She dove in and kissed him. Jack didn’t register it in time and she looked at him questionably. “What’s wrong Jack?”
“I don’t-“
“You don’t like me?”
“PANGE!” Angela yelled from the enterance, her voice sounding extremely different. Jack looked at her she was fuming. If it were possible smoke would’ve come out of her ears right about now. Angela calmed herself down to her usual voice.
“Jack I have a few matters to discuss with Pange if you may excuse us.”
“Sure thing,” He said with a smile. Angela smiled back at him. He walked out of the room not able to comprehend the smile Angela gave him.
“Is this a new mission?”
“No this is a bit different, a bit more serious…”
She looked puzzled but she had some kind of idea that this was headed in a bad direction. “You seem to have gotten a little close to Jack..”
She stood quiet. And Angela walked around to her, circling her and her hands reaching for Pange’s sword. She drew the sword out. “You see this is a knight’s honour.”
Pange nodded. “So seeing that I hope that you will obey my next order. Stay away from Jack. He doesn’t need you, he doesn’t want you, you can’t change anything for him or give him anything he wants.”
“But I love—“
She was cut off. She couldn’t speak her hands clunching on the sharpness of the sword which had pierced through her body. She gasped.
“I said to stay away from Jack. Will you take this order?”
She couldn’t move she just stood in that position. Angela standing tall and proud holding the sword at an angle which pierced through her stomach. Angela tilted the sword and Pange let out a cry.
“Will you?”
“Ye-s” She managed. Angela drew the sword out and Pange fell to the floor the blood flowing from her body. She whimpered and shivered. Angela looked at her with pity and walked out of the room.
Mimi sat on her bed and stared at the two movie tickets in her hand. What was she to do with them and who had put it in her bag? She thought about her options. Give it to Nate and Yuffie and they’d go enjoy a good movie together well that will get them out of the house at least. She didn’t particularily enjoy being the intruder in their makeout sessions, which by the way never ended. ‘Hmm how about Eminence?’
She thought about that for a moment. ‘What about Eminence and James? They looked cute together but they didn’t give off the girlfriend-boyfriend vibe. Ahh who cares just give it to her she’ll figure something out.’ She stared at the tickets again. It was a soppy love drama movie. ‘Yuck,’ She thought.
………………………….......
Mimi walked over to Eminence. “Hey Ems. Look I got these tickets and I dunno wat to do with em’. Do you want them?”
“Uhh Ok!” She said with a cheery smile. She streamed through her possibilities. She could go with another girl in the group or she could pick James…But she didn’t know whether he would want to go. She looked at the ticket and when she saw it was a love movie she made a weird facial expression. Mimi assumed that it was her way of showing dislike. Mimi grinned. “I’ll leave you to your thinking then,” she said with a wide grin followed by a wink. Eminence remembered where she was and that she just stood there for 2 minutes dreaming about going to the movies with James. She wanted to kick herself. Mimi laughed, “K ill see ya later,”
“Bye Bye” Eminence said and returned to her daydreaming.
…………………………………
Jack paced back and forth in his bedroom. ‘What do I do now? Leave a sweet, innocent girl in prison and let her believe that you’re evil or face a bloodthirsty homicidal maniac and tell her you don’t love her.’ He then had a vision of her sucking his blood and his hand came to his neck. ‘That’s a slightly horrifiying thought. Just then Pange walked into the room with a huge grin on her face.
Jack looked up. ‘What’s she got to grin about? Dammit im not in the mood…’
She giggled in her usual flirty way, “Hey Jack,”
“Hey,”
She walked closer to him and without any consent put her arms around his neck. “Our last meeting was a little bit interrupted wasn’t it?”
“Umm…”
She dove in and kissed him. Jack didn’t register it in time and she looked at him questionably. “What’s wrong Jack?”
“I don’t-“
“You don’t like me?”
“PANGE!” Angela yelled from the enterance, her voice sounding extremely different. Jack looked at her she was fuming. If it were possible smoke would’ve come out of her ears right about now. Angela calmed herself down to her usual voice.
“Jack I have a few matters to discuss with Pange if you may excuse us.”
“Sure thing,” He said with a smile. Angela smiled back at him. He walked out of the room not able to comprehend the smile Angela gave him.
“Is this a new mission?”
“No this is a bit different, a bit more serious…”
She looked puzzled but she had some kind of idea that this was headed in a bad direction. “You seem to have gotten a little close to Jack..”
She stood quiet. And Angela walked around to her, circling her and her hands reaching for Pange’s sword. She drew the sword out. “You see this is a knight’s honour.”
Pange nodded. “So seeing that I hope that you will obey my next order. Stay away from Jack. He doesn’t need you, he doesn’t want you, you can’t change anything for him or give him anything he wants.”
“But I love—“
She was cut off. She couldn’t speak her hands clunching on the sharpness of the sword which had pierced through her body. She gasped.
“I said to stay away from Jack. Will you take this order?”
She couldn’t move she just stood in that position. Angela standing tall and proud holding the sword at an angle which pierced through her stomach. Angela tilted the sword and Pange let out a cry.
“Will you?”
“Ye-s” She managed. Angela drew the sword out and Pange fell to the floor the blood flowing from her body. She whimpered and shivered. Angela looked at her with pity and walked out of the room.
Saturday, December 6, 2008
What's the name of this story- Chapter 17
Chapter 17 (PART 1) – Rage
Rage walked out of the bar and across the side path to his bike. Yeah that was enough drinking for one day though he felt like he could drink forever. He saw a group of guys gathering around a girl. ‘Ah shit those guys don’t learn the first time I teach them a lesson’ He cracked his knuckles and walked over, ‘This time I’ll give em’ a real beating.’
“Hey girl, what you doing all alone out here at night?” One of the guys asked.
“Staying away from you!” The girl replied.
“Well you’re not doing a very good jo—“ He was knocked unconscious by Rage’s first blow. Within a few seconds all the guys were on the ground shivering or out cold. “Damn bastards.”
Rage looked over to the girl, “You alright?”
“Yeah I’m fine.”
“Do you want me to take you home?”
“I—“
“You don’t gotta be scared come lets get you outta here,”
When they reached he volunteered to walk her to the door. “Umm thank you for helping me back there…”
Rage tried to look indifferent, “It was no problem.”
“What is your name?”
“Rage.”
“Is that your real name?”
“Lance but I prefer rage,”
“OK Rage Thank You,”
After dropping the grateful girl off to her place he walked down another few lanes to find his bike. His alcohol was starting to wear off but he could ride a bike no matter how drunk he was. He rode to his small apartment and walked in. It was extremely tiny and the place was dump. Well you kind of expected that from a guy like him. He lay down on his bed and sighed in frustration. ‘This is gay. Dammit this means a one way ticket to the geek squad. Well at least the Mutiny aint as bad as this apartment and plus Mi’s going to be there. Haven’t seen her in a while...’
…………………………
William drove over to Shellfish’s hideout. Why had she called him there? Wouldn’t it usually be Mimi or even Nate? When he reached the place he rung the bell and waited outside. Shellfish opened the door and invited him in.
“Take a seat William,”
He sat down, “What’s up Shell haven’t had one of these conferences with you in ages,”
“I decided that at the time you would be the best person to talk to,”
“Why Mimi-“
“Mimi has a lot on her mind and I think we should get to the topic. I have told you about the chosen 11. I have still yet to find the 11. And I am eager to get the group essembled before this war goes too far,”
“But we don’t have any idea, we know lot’s of people but how are we going to know if they are the chosen ones?”
“We can’t be sure until all the 11 are together.”
“But right now we only have 8 people on the gang and for all we know half of them might not be the right people.”
“When we have 11 people I will be able to tell if they are chosen. Afterall I am alive for that very purpose. To guide the 11, though I’m not doing a good job.”
“No you’re doing an excellent Job. The problem is we are just sitting around doing nothing. We should be on a mission, looking for the rest of the gang.”
“I am afraid the chosen will find each other rather than be found, William. But I do have a mission for you.”
“FINALLY!”
Seeing William’s enthusiasm about a mission made Shellfish smile. “I can sense the Princess’ presence near or in the castle. You are going to search the castle for the princess,”
“WHAT?! We’re against hundreds of guards and weapons. AWESOME!”
“Did I mention you are not storming the castle, you are going to try and not get detected during the mission,”
“Oh great…”
“So you will inform the rest?”
“Will do!”
“Ok William then I will see you soon.”
“Yeah soon!”
New character YAY! lol for those of you who didnt get it Rage is like his nickname more like captain fish for james and mimi for minona his real name is lance. Also i had to point out that Rage referred to Mimi as Mi. Just found that cute so i added it :P! Also this i got carried away writing this so ill have to divide it into two chapters! lol ill try to get the second one up tomorrow! Am luvin writing this and i hope ur luvin reading this! xoxo zuzu
Rage walked out of the bar and across the side path to his bike. Yeah that was enough drinking for one day though he felt like he could drink forever. He saw a group of guys gathering around a girl. ‘Ah shit those guys don’t learn the first time I teach them a lesson’ He cracked his knuckles and walked over, ‘This time I’ll give em’ a real beating.’
“Hey girl, what you doing all alone out here at night?” One of the guys asked.
“Staying away from you!” The girl replied.
“Well you’re not doing a very good jo—“ He was knocked unconscious by Rage’s first blow. Within a few seconds all the guys were on the ground shivering or out cold. “Damn bastards.”
Rage looked over to the girl, “You alright?”
“Yeah I’m fine.”
“Do you want me to take you home?”
“I—“
“You don’t gotta be scared come lets get you outta here,”
When they reached he volunteered to walk her to the door. “Umm thank you for helping me back there…”
Rage tried to look indifferent, “It was no problem.”
“What is your name?”
“Rage.”
“Is that your real name?”
“Lance but I prefer rage,”
“OK Rage Thank You,”
After dropping the grateful girl off to her place he walked down another few lanes to find his bike. His alcohol was starting to wear off but he could ride a bike no matter how drunk he was. He rode to his small apartment and walked in. It was extremely tiny and the place was dump. Well you kind of expected that from a guy like him. He lay down on his bed and sighed in frustration. ‘This is gay. Dammit this means a one way ticket to the geek squad. Well at least the Mutiny aint as bad as this apartment and plus Mi’s going to be there. Haven’t seen her in a while...’
…………………………
William drove over to Shellfish’s hideout. Why had she called him there? Wouldn’t it usually be Mimi or even Nate? When he reached the place he rung the bell and waited outside. Shellfish opened the door and invited him in.
“Take a seat William,”
He sat down, “What’s up Shell haven’t had one of these conferences with you in ages,”
“I decided that at the time you would be the best person to talk to,”
“Why Mimi-“
“Mimi has a lot on her mind and I think we should get to the topic. I have told you about the chosen 11. I have still yet to find the 11. And I am eager to get the group essembled before this war goes too far,”
“But we don’t have any idea, we know lot’s of people but how are we going to know if they are the chosen ones?”
“We can’t be sure until all the 11 are together.”
“But right now we only have 8 people on the gang and for all we know half of them might not be the right people.”
“When we have 11 people I will be able to tell if they are chosen. Afterall I am alive for that very purpose. To guide the 11, though I’m not doing a good job.”
“No you’re doing an excellent Job. The problem is we are just sitting around doing nothing. We should be on a mission, looking for the rest of the gang.”
“I am afraid the chosen will find each other rather than be found, William. But I do have a mission for you.”
“FINALLY!”
Seeing William’s enthusiasm about a mission made Shellfish smile. “I can sense the Princess’ presence near or in the castle. You are going to search the castle for the princess,”
“WHAT?! We’re against hundreds of guards and weapons. AWESOME!”
“Did I mention you are not storming the castle, you are going to try and not get detected during the mission,”
“Oh great…”
“So you will inform the rest?”
“Will do!”
“Ok William then I will see you soon.”
“Yeah soon!”
New character YAY! lol for those of you who didnt get it Rage is like his nickname more like captain fish for james and mimi for minona his real name is lance. Also i had to point out that Rage referred to Mimi as Mi. Just found that cute so i added it :P! Also this i got carried away writing this so ill have to divide it into two chapters! lol ill try to get the second one up tomorrow! Am luvin writing this and i hope ur luvin reading this! xoxo zuzu
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