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Monday, December 22, 2008
Thursday, December 18, 2008
What's the name of this story? Chapter 19
Chapter 19- Just missed her
New Character introduced! Jessica-lifesizelaila
Jack had given her water and tried to make her eat something but she had passed out. He sat there just looking at her. Her beautiful green hair sprawled out around her. He wished she would open those green eyes of hers, those eyes that were green as the grass when she smiled. He had fallen asleep sitting like that until she stirred in her sleep and began to wake up.
She gained conscience and found those two unique brown eyes staring down at her. His brown eyes staring down at her.
He ran a hand over her face. “How are you feeling?”
She didn’t say a word. ‘Yeah she’s mad at you alright,’ Jack thought.
“I am so so sorry. I swear on my life the only thing I had planned that evening was our escape. Everything else was incidental. Please, Please forgive me. I am so sorry.” She was still lying in his laps but he was now hugging her, his face against hers.
“Don’t touch me,” Madeline said.
“I said I’m sorry. I didn’t plan it… I didn’t plan anything. Please I’m telling the truth,”
She looked at him. Captain Jack…the fearless knight of Angela’s was looking like his soul had been ripped from him. He stared desperately at her with tears at the back of his eyes. She couldn’t see the tears but she could smell them.
She rested into her place, “I don’t know why…but for some reason I believe you…” She said and dozed off to sleep.
………………………………
Jez read the wanted sign on the board. ‘Haha that’s a whopper prize on this so called mutiny.’ She read on, ‘ I see Princess Madeline has issued it herself. Princess Madeline my ass I know she’s that pirate bitch. Need to see her…’
……………………………..
Angela played around with her swords when she was interrupted by a guard. “Your majesty. A woman has come to the castle claiming she can find the Mutiny and would like to speak in person with you. What should I tell her?”
“You may let her in…”
A few seconds later a young brunette with short hair and a rather smug look walked in the room. “Nice place you got here…”
“Please get to the point. I don’t like stray conversations”
“Yeah well you put up a poster on the wanted board. The mutiny..eh? I can chase them down no problem. No criminal gotten past me before,”
“First of all you will refer to me as your majesty or Princess Madeline…”
“Your no princess I know exactly who you are…You see I have a nose for criminals.”
Angela smirked. “I see that you do. So tell me why have you come here. The reward I have put up not good enough for someone like you?”
“Your right now target. You see I don’t work for the average amount of cash. I work fast and hard and I expect that kind of money..ya know?”
“What kind of money do you want? Any money will do as long as you find them and report to me their location.”
“Any sum of money?”
“Any some of money.”
“Well get that blank cheque ready cuz these mutiny freaks will be on you doorstep A-S-A-P.”
“I should hope so…”
……………………………………
Nate stared at the piece of paper with fury.
Dear William, Yuffie, Nate, Valeria, Em, James and Astaroche,
After long hours of thinking about it, I think I have finally figured it out. I am not one of the mutiny and therefore I cant stay with you guys any longer. I hope you understand. Please take care and remember everything I have taught you from my time around, you’ll need it.
Lots of Love,
Minona
How could she fucking do that? ‘Dammit cuz it was my own damn fault!’ He thought. Now she’s gone. He just didn’t think that Mimi would take their fights that seriously. But now he wasn’t going to go look for her. No. She thinks she can run off well my ass she can. She can kill herself for all I care. That bitch for taking off on the mutiny. But then his inner Nate took over and he started blaming himself. Astaroche walked into his room and put a hand to his shoulder. “Nate honey. Now that Mimi’s gone everyone needs you. Mimi was the leader but now we need someone to keep the team together. That’s you Nate! Come on lets go outside…”
They walked out together but as they walked Nate remembered Mimi and his last encounter.
He held her hands tight. She was pinned again a wall, struggling to break free.
“Nate! Fucking let go of me!”
“No! Tell me you love me!”
“No!” He held her harder digging his nails into her skin so that one of her hands started bleeding.
“Ouch! You Bastard let go of me!” She kicked him away and looked at him with irritation.
“How many times do I have to tell you its over. I don’t love you and you don’t love me. I know it!”
“I do love you!”
“Nate please hear me out,”
He calmed down and nodded at her approvingly to continue. “Nate I’ve seen the way you look at Astaroche.”
“I don’t-“
“Please..”
“Okay”
“I know you love her. You loved her enough to let go of me in the first. Nate, I know what you did was wrong..To leave me like that and now you have realized it. But that doesn’t mean you have to cling to me. You don’t have to love me because I know you don’t. Please I know you will understand..”
“But-“
“Look I’m tired. We’ll talk later, maybe.”
“I’m sorry. I’m sorry about your hand, everything.”
“I know..”He was knocked into reality when he nearly tripped over a fallen branch. He came and sat down around the seafire, 6 colourless faces staring at him.
“She’s gone and we have to get over it…” Nate said. He looked at William.
“William I want you to lead us.”
“Me but why? Why not you?” William asked.
“I think you are more fitting for the role in these circumstances.”
“OK but if I screw you guys up im not taking the blame,” William joked.
Nate managed the smile and everyone’s face lit up at that. They sat around the fire for a while just talking about random things until they heard the roaring of an engine.
Nate saw a motorbike approaching and they automatically got to their feet and had their defences up.
Rage jumped off his bike and took his helmet off to see 7 people looking like they were gonna attack him any second. ‘Amateurs..’ He thought. When Nate saw who it was. He told him to lower their guard.
Rage walked in to the bundle and saw a couple of girls blushing and the guys staring at him with questionable faces.
“Well you all looked surprised…”
“We are. What bring you here?”
“Oh what brings me to the geek squad?”
Eminence and Valeria giggled at that. Rage looked at them and then looked back at Nate.
“Felt like it was time for a visit…”
“Your timings as pathetic as ever”
Rage knew something was wrong. He looked around and saw that Mimi wasn’t insight. “Where’s Mimi?”
Everyone’s smiles disappeared. “You just missed her,” Nate said.
New Character introduced! Jessica-lifesizelaila
Jack had given her water and tried to make her eat something but she had passed out. He sat there just looking at her. Her beautiful green hair sprawled out around her. He wished she would open those green eyes of hers, those eyes that were green as the grass when she smiled. He had fallen asleep sitting like that until she stirred in her sleep and began to wake up.
She gained conscience and found those two unique brown eyes staring down at her. His brown eyes staring down at her.
He ran a hand over her face. “How are you feeling?”
She didn’t say a word. ‘Yeah she’s mad at you alright,’ Jack thought.
“I am so so sorry. I swear on my life the only thing I had planned that evening was our escape. Everything else was incidental. Please, Please forgive me. I am so sorry.” She was still lying in his laps but he was now hugging her, his face against hers.
“Don’t touch me,” Madeline said.
“I said I’m sorry. I didn’t plan it… I didn’t plan anything. Please I’m telling the truth,”
She looked at him. Captain Jack…the fearless knight of Angela’s was looking like his soul had been ripped from him. He stared desperately at her with tears at the back of his eyes. She couldn’t see the tears but she could smell them.
She rested into her place, “I don’t know why…but for some reason I believe you…” She said and dozed off to sleep.
………………………………
Jez read the wanted sign on the board. ‘Haha that’s a whopper prize on this so called mutiny.’ She read on, ‘ I see Princess Madeline has issued it herself. Princess Madeline my ass I know she’s that pirate bitch. Need to see her…’
……………………………..
Angela played around with her swords when she was interrupted by a guard. “Your majesty. A woman has come to the castle claiming she can find the Mutiny and would like to speak in person with you. What should I tell her?”
“You may let her in…”
A few seconds later a young brunette with short hair and a rather smug look walked in the room. “Nice place you got here…”
“Please get to the point. I don’t like stray conversations”
“Yeah well you put up a poster on the wanted board. The mutiny..eh? I can chase them down no problem. No criminal gotten past me before,”
“First of all you will refer to me as your majesty or Princess Madeline…”
“Your no princess I know exactly who you are…You see I have a nose for criminals.”
Angela smirked. “I see that you do. So tell me why have you come here. The reward I have put up not good enough for someone like you?”
“Your right now target. You see I don’t work for the average amount of cash. I work fast and hard and I expect that kind of money..ya know?”
“What kind of money do you want? Any money will do as long as you find them and report to me their location.”
“Any sum of money?”
“Any some of money.”
“Well get that blank cheque ready cuz these mutiny freaks will be on you doorstep A-S-A-P.”
“I should hope so…”
……………………………………
Nate stared at the piece of paper with fury.
Dear William, Yuffie, Nate, Valeria, Em, James and Astaroche,
After long hours of thinking about it, I think I have finally figured it out. I am not one of the mutiny and therefore I cant stay with you guys any longer. I hope you understand. Please take care and remember everything I have taught you from my time around, you’ll need it.
Lots of Love,
Minona
How could she fucking do that? ‘Dammit cuz it was my own damn fault!’ He thought. Now she’s gone. He just didn’t think that Mimi would take their fights that seriously. But now he wasn’t going to go look for her. No. She thinks she can run off well my ass she can. She can kill herself for all I care. That bitch for taking off on the mutiny. But then his inner Nate took over and he started blaming himself. Astaroche walked into his room and put a hand to his shoulder. “Nate honey. Now that Mimi’s gone everyone needs you. Mimi was the leader but now we need someone to keep the team together. That’s you Nate! Come on lets go outside…”
They walked out together but as they walked Nate remembered Mimi and his last encounter.
He held her hands tight. She was pinned again a wall, struggling to break free.
“Nate! Fucking let go of me!”
“No! Tell me you love me!”
“No!” He held her harder digging his nails into her skin so that one of her hands started bleeding.
“Ouch! You Bastard let go of me!” She kicked him away and looked at him with irritation.
“How many times do I have to tell you its over. I don’t love you and you don’t love me. I know it!”
“I do love you!”
“Nate please hear me out,”
He calmed down and nodded at her approvingly to continue. “Nate I’ve seen the way you look at Astaroche.”
“I don’t-“
“Please..”
“Okay”
“I know you love her. You loved her enough to let go of me in the first. Nate, I know what you did was wrong..To leave me like that and now you have realized it. But that doesn’t mean you have to cling to me. You don’t have to love me because I know you don’t. Please I know you will understand..”
“But-“
“Look I’m tired. We’ll talk later, maybe.”
“I’m sorry. I’m sorry about your hand, everything.”
“I know..”He was knocked into reality when he nearly tripped over a fallen branch. He came and sat down around the seafire, 6 colourless faces staring at him.
“She’s gone and we have to get over it…” Nate said. He looked at William.
“William I want you to lead us.”
“Me but why? Why not you?” William asked.
“I think you are more fitting for the role in these circumstances.”
“OK but if I screw you guys up im not taking the blame,” William joked.
Nate managed the smile and everyone’s face lit up at that. They sat around the fire for a while just talking about random things until they heard the roaring of an engine.
Nate saw a motorbike approaching and they automatically got to their feet and had their defences up.
Rage jumped off his bike and took his helmet off to see 7 people looking like they were gonna attack him any second. ‘Amateurs..’ He thought. When Nate saw who it was. He told him to lower their guard.
Rage walked in to the bundle and saw a couple of girls blushing and the guys staring at him with questionable faces.
“Well you all looked surprised…”
“We are. What bring you here?”
“Oh what brings me to the geek squad?”
Eminence and Valeria giggled at that. Rage looked at them and then looked back at Nate.
“Felt like it was time for a visit…”
“Your timings as pathetic as ever”
Rage knew something was wrong. He looked around and saw that Mimi wasn’t insight. “Where’s Mimi?”
Everyone’s smiles disappeared. “You just missed her,” Nate said.
Wednesday, December 17, 2008
What's the name of this story? Chapter 18
Chapter 18- The odd one out
Jack walked out of the medlab. ‘Shit who can do such a thing? And why attack Pange out of all people?’ Angela said that they had a chat about an attack on Squidaria and she left then the next hing they find her bleeding to death. Dammit this is all my fault now she’s in a comma with a 50/50 chance of making it. Jack decided it was finally time to face up to Madeline. Crap what would she think of him?
Jack used his ID and entered her new prison. Surprisingly it was the room right next to the throne room. Angela and her wacky ways to imprison people… He walked in and saw Madeline. His id fell to the floor as he saw her pale face, her hands and feet cuffed to the wall so he was hanging in the air. Why hadn’t he come earlier. WHY? He ran to her.
She couldn’t open her eyes. She didn’t have the strength but she knew that scent… it was his scent. She didn’t want to talk to him and for a second she was glad she didn’t have the energy to look at him. He grabbed the keys in his pocket and unlocked her cuffs at once. She was unstable and fell but Jack caught her in his arms. He sat down, Madeline lying in his arms and sprawled across his lap.
She made a soft noise. “I’m here, Madeline. Shhhh. I’m here” He brought his face to hers and rested it there.
…………………………………
Chase had gotten back from his last war successful two days ago. Lisa was concerned. During those two days he hadn’t once come to see her. Lisa paced to his room. Why? What was going on?
She opened the door and walked in on a Chase thoroughly indulged in a book. “Chase?”
He lifted his head and was surprised to see Lisa. Not really he had been avoiding Lisa for a while with no good reason or perhaps a reason he couldn’t define?
“Where were you?” Lisa asked.
“I- I was..” He was speechless, King Chase the conquerer was speechless! Damn you say something to the girl!
“I don’t know,” Great going Einstein.
“What do you mean you don’t know?!” What’s he doing? Playing with her? I’m not in the mood..
“I’m sorry. Just things in my head I need to clear out.”
Lisa tried to look at this from his point of view, trying to be understanding. Chase held out his arms and Lisa walked into them. They stood there for what seemed like hours in utter silence. She broke apart and looked at him.
“Chase do you love me?”
The was no response from him. ‘Seriously is it that hard for him to bloody answer. Yes or No! She would prefer the former but anything just say anything!’
“I don’t know…”
“What do you mean you—“ She was cut of by his deep kiss.
“I just don’t know yet…” There was something inside him. Something keeping him.
………………………………………
Mimi looked at the sheet of paper and sighed. She had made her decision. She wasn’t one of them…She just wasn’t. Her conscience spoke to her, *Are you really not one of them?*
‘Yeah I’m not. Why you think otherwise?’
*It might be that you’re the leader and you’re abandoning them. Some leader you turned out to be*
‘It wasn’t me. Shellfish said that I was one of them’
*So little innocent Mimi always does what she is told?*
‘Hey who’s fukin side are you on?’
*I’m the disagreeing conscience what do you think brainiac?*
She sighed and got up. No this was it. She looked at her farewell note once more And left it on the table. She had done everything she would to help. Even Nate seemed happy these days with Astaroche’s company. William had Yuffie. Eminence had James. Everyone was happy. She was the odd one out and once she left the mutiny would be real. She jumped out of the window and grabbed the first vehicle she saw and drove off.
Jack walked out of the medlab. ‘Shit who can do such a thing? And why attack Pange out of all people?’ Angela said that they had a chat about an attack on Squidaria and she left then the next hing they find her bleeding to death. Dammit this is all my fault now she’s in a comma with a 50/50 chance of making it. Jack decided it was finally time to face up to Madeline. Crap what would she think of him?
Jack used his ID and entered her new prison. Surprisingly it was the room right next to the throne room. Angela and her wacky ways to imprison people… He walked in and saw Madeline. His id fell to the floor as he saw her pale face, her hands and feet cuffed to the wall so he was hanging in the air. Why hadn’t he come earlier. WHY? He ran to her.
She couldn’t open her eyes. She didn’t have the strength but she knew that scent… it was his scent. She didn’t want to talk to him and for a second she was glad she didn’t have the energy to look at him. He grabbed the keys in his pocket and unlocked her cuffs at once. She was unstable and fell but Jack caught her in his arms. He sat down, Madeline lying in his arms and sprawled across his lap.
She made a soft noise. “I’m here, Madeline. Shhhh. I’m here” He brought his face to hers and rested it there.
…………………………………
Chase had gotten back from his last war successful two days ago. Lisa was concerned. During those two days he hadn’t once come to see her. Lisa paced to his room. Why? What was going on?
She opened the door and walked in on a Chase thoroughly indulged in a book. “Chase?”
He lifted his head and was surprised to see Lisa. Not really he had been avoiding Lisa for a while with no good reason or perhaps a reason he couldn’t define?
“Where were you?” Lisa asked.
“I- I was..” He was speechless, King Chase the conquerer was speechless! Damn you say something to the girl!
“I don’t know,” Great going Einstein.
“What do you mean you don’t know?!” What’s he doing? Playing with her? I’m not in the mood..
“I’m sorry. Just things in my head I need to clear out.”
Lisa tried to look at this from his point of view, trying to be understanding. Chase held out his arms and Lisa walked into them. They stood there for what seemed like hours in utter silence. She broke apart and looked at him.
“Chase do you love me?”
The was no response from him. ‘Seriously is it that hard for him to bloody answer. Yes or No! She would prefer the former but anything just say anything!’
“I don’t know…”
“What do you mean you—“ She was cut of by his deep kiss.
“I just don’t know yet…” There was something inside him. Something keeping him.
………………………………………
Mimi looked at the sheet of paper and sighed. She had made her decision. She wasn’t one of them…She just wasn’t. Her conscience spoke to her, *Are you really not one of them?*
‘Yeah I’m not. Why you think otherwise?’
*It might be that you’re the leader and you’re abandoning them. Some leader you turned out to be*
‘It wasn’t me. Shellfish said that I was one of them’
*So little innocent Mimi always does what she is told?*
‘Hey who’s fukin side are you on?’
*I’m the disagreeing conscience what do you think brainiac?*
She sighed and got up. No this was it. She looked at her farewell note once more And left it on the table. She had done everything she would to help. Even Nate seemed happy these days with Astaroche’s company. William had Yuffie. Eminence had James. Everyone was happy. She was the odd one out and once she left the mutiny would be real. She jumped out of the window and grabbed the first vehicle she saw and drove off.
Sunday, December 14, 2008
What's the name of this story- Chapter 17
Chapter 17- (Part 2) Lovers fatal arrow
Mimi sat on her bed and stared at the two movie tickets in her hand. What was she to do with them and who had put it in her bag? She thought about her options. Give it to Nate and Yuffie and they’d go enjoy a good movie together well that will get them out of the house at least. She didn’t particularily enjoy being the intruder in their makeout sessions, which by the way never ended. ‘Hmm how about Eminence?’
She thought about that for a moment. ‘What about Eminence and James? They looked cute together but they didn’t give off the girlfriend-boyfriend vibe. Ahh who cares just give it to her she’ll figure something out.’ She stared at the tickets again. It was a soppy love drama movie. ‘Yuck,’ She thought.
………………………….......
Mimi walked over to Eminence. “Hey Ems. Look I got these tickets and I dunno wat to do with em’. Do you want them?”
“Uhh Ok!” She said with a cheery smile. She streamed through her possibilities. She could go with another girl in the group or she could pick James…But she didn’t know whether he would want to go. She looked at the ticket and when she saw it was a love movie she made a weird facial expression. Mimi assumed that it was her way of showing dislike. Mimi grinned. “I’ll leave you to your thinking then,” she said with a wide grin followed by a wink. Eminence remembered where she was and that she just stood there for 2 minutes dreaming about going to the movies with James. She wanted to kick herself. Mimi laughed, “K ill see ya later,”
“Bye Bye” Eminence said and returned to her daydreaming.
…………………………………
Jack paced back and forth in his bedroom. ‘What do I do now? Leave a sweet, innocent girl in prison and let her believe that you’re evil or face a bloodthirsty homicidal maniac and tell her you don’t love her.’ He then had a vision of her sucking his blood and his hand came to his neck. ‘That’s a slightly horrifiying thought. Just then Pange walked into the room with a huge grin on her face.
Jack looked up. ‘What’s she got to grin about? Dammit im not in the mood…’
She giggled in her usual flirty way, “Hey Jack,”
“Hey,”
She walked closer to him and without any consent put her arms around his neck. “Our last meeting was a little bit interrupted wasn’t it?”
“Umm…”
She dove in and kissed him. Jack didn’t register it in time and she looked at him questionably. “What’s wrong Jack?”
“I don’t-“
“You don’t like me?”
“PANGE!” Angela yelled from the enterance, her voice sounding extremely different. Jack looked at her she was fuming. If it were possible smoke would’ve come out of her ears right about now. Angela calmed herself down to her usual voice.
“Jack I have a few matters to discuss with Pange if you may excuse us.”
“Sure thing,” He said with a smile. Angela smiled back at him. He walked out of the room not able to comprehend the smile Angela gave him.
“Is this a new mission?”
“No this is a bit different, a bit more serious…”
She looked puzzled but she had some kind of idea that this was headed in a bad direction. “You seem to have gotten a little close to Jack..”
She stood quiet. And Angela walked around to her, circling her and her hands reaching for Pange’s sword. She drew the sword out. “You see this is a knight’s honour.”
Pange nodded. “So seeing that I hope that you will obey my next order. Stay away from Jack. He doesn’t need you, he doesn’t want you, you can’t change anything for him or give him anything he wants.”
“But I love—“
She was cut off. She couldn’t speak her hands clunching on the sharpness of the sword which had pierced through her body. She gasped.
“I said to stay away from Jack. Will you take this order?”
She couldn’t move she just stood in that position. Angela standing tall and proud holding the sword at an angle which pierced through her stomach. Angela tilted the sword and Pange let out a cry.
“Will you?”
“Ye-s” She managed. Angela drew the sword out and Pange fell to the floor the blood flowing from her body. She whimpered and shivered. Angela looked at her with pity and walked out of the room.
Mimi sat on her bed and stared at the two movie tickets in her hand. What was she to do with them and who had put it in her bag? She thought about her options. Give it to Nate and Yuffie and they’d go enjoy a good movie together well that will get them out of the house at least. She didn’t particularily enjoy being the intruder in their makeout sessions, which by the way never ended. ‘Hmm how about Eminence?’
She thought about that for a moment. ‘What about Eminence and James? They looked cute together but they didn’t give off the girlfriend-boyfriend vibe. Ahh who cares just give it to her she’ll figure something out.’ She stared at the tickets again. It was a soppy love drama movie. ‘Yuck,’ She thought.
………………………….......
Mimi walked over to Eminence. “Hey Ems. Look I got these tickets and I dunno wat to do with em’. Do you want them?”
“Uhh Ok!” She said with a cheery smile. She streamed through her possibilities. She could go with another girl in the group or she could pick James…But she didn’t know whether he would want to go. She looked at the ticket and when she saw it was a love movie she made a weird facial expression. Mimi assumed that it was her way of showing dislike. Mimi grinned. “I’ll leave you to your thinking then,” she said with a wide grin followed by a wink. Eminence remembered where she was and that she just stood there for 2 minutes dreaming about going to the movies with James. She wanted to kick herself. Mimi laughed, “K ill see ya later,”
“Bye Bye” Eminence said and returned to her daydreaming.
…………………………………
Jack paced back and forth in his bedroom. ‘What do I do now? Leave a sweet, innocent girl in prison and let her believe that you’re evil or face a bloodthirsty homicidal maniac and tell her you don’t love her.’ He then had a vision of her sucking his blood and his hand came to his neck. ‘That’s a slightly horrifiying thought. Just then Pange walked into the room with a huge grin on her face.
Jack looked up. ‘What’s she got to grin about? Dammit im not in the mood…’
She giggled in her usual flirty way, “Hey Jack,”
“Hey,”
She walked closer to him and without any consent put her arms around his neck. “Our last meeting was a little bit interrupted wasn’t it?”
“Umm…”
She dove in and kissed him. Jack didn’t register it in time and she looked at him questionably. “What’s wrong Jack?”
“I don’t-“
“You don’t like me?”
“PANGE!” Angela yelled from the enterance, her voice sounding extremely different. Jack looked at her she was fuming. If it were possible smoke would’ve come out of her ears right about now. Angela calmed herself down to her usual voice.
“Jack I have a few matters to discuss with Pange if you may excuse us.”
“Sure thing,” He said with a smile. Angela smiled back at him. He walked out of the room not able to comprehend the smile Angela gave him.
“Is this a new mission?”
“No this is a bit different, a bit more serious…”
She looked puzzled but she had some kind of idea that this was headed in a bad direction. “You seem to have gotten a little close to Jack..”
She stood quiet. And Angela walked around to her, circling her and her hands reaching for Pange’s sword. She drew the sword out. “You see this is a knight’s honour.”
Pange nodded. “So seeing that I hope that you will obey my next order. Stay away from Jack. He doesn’t need you, he doesn’t want you, you can’t change anything for him or give him anything he wants.”
“But I love—“
She was cut off. She couldn’t speak her hands clunching on the sharpness of the sword which had pierced through her body. She gasped.
“I said to stay away from Jack. Will you take this order?”
She couldn’t move she just stood in that position. Angela standing tall and proud holding the sword at an angle which pierced through her stomach. Angela tilted the sword and Pange let out a cry.
“Will you?”
“Ye-s” She managed. Angela drew the sword out and Pange fell to the floor the blood flowing from her body. She whimpered and shivered. Angela looked at her with pity and walked out of the room.
Saturday, December 6, 2008
What's the name of this story- Chapter 17
Chapter 17 (PART 1) – Rage
Rage walked out of the bar and across the side path to his bike. Yeah that was enough drinking for one day though he felt like he could drink forever. He saw a group of guys gathering around a girl. ‘Ah shit those guys don’t learn the first time I teach them a lesson’ He cracked his knuckles and walked over, ‘This time I’ll give em’ a real beating.’
“Hey girl, what you doing all alone out here at night?” One of the guys asked.
“Staying away from you!” The girl replied.
“Well you’re not doing a very good jo—“ He was knocked unconscious by Rage’s first blow. Within a few seconds all the guys were on the ground shivering or out cold. “Damn bastards.”
Rage looked over to the girl, “You alright?”
“Yeah I’m fine.”
“Do you want me to take you home?”
“I—“
“You don’t gotta be scared come lets get you outta here,”
When they reached he volunteered to walk her to the door. “Umm thank you for helping me back there…”
Rage tried to look indifferent, “It was no problem.”
“What is your name?”
“Rage.”
“Is that your real name?”
“Lance but I prefer rage,”
“OK Rage Thank You,”
After dropping the grateful girl off to her place he walked down another few lanes to find his bike. His alcohol was starting to wear off but he could ride a bike no matter how drunk he was. He rode to his small apartment and walked in. It was extremely tiny and the place was dump. Well you kind of expected that from a guy like him. He lay down on his bed and sighed in frustration. ‘This is gay. Dammit this means a one way ticket to the geek squad. Well at least the Mutiny aint as bad as this apartment and plus Mi’s going to be there. Haven’t seen her in a while...’
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William drove over to Shellfish’s hideout. Why had she called him there? Wouldn’t it usually be Mimi or even Nate? When he reached the place he rung the bell and waited outside. Shellfish opened the door and invited him in.
“Take a seat William,”
He sat down, “What’s up Shell haven’t had one of these conferences with you in ages,”
“I decided that at the time you would be the best person to talk to,”
“Why Mimi-“
“Mimi has a lot on her mind and I think we should get to the topic. I have told you about the chosen 11. I have still yet to find the 11. And I am eager to get the group essembled before this war goes too far,”
“But we don’t have any idea, we know lot’s of people but how are we going to know if they are the chosen ones?”
“We can’t be sure until all the 11 are together.”
“But right now we only have 8 people on the gang and for all we know half of them might not be the right people.”
“When we have 11 people I will be able to tell if they are chosen. Afterall I am alive for that very purpose. To guide the 11, though I’m not doing a good job.”
“No you’re doing an excellent Job. The problem is we are just sitting around doing nothing. We should be on a mission, looking for the rest of the gang.”
“I am afraid the chosen will find each other rather than be found, William. But I do have a mission for you.”
“FINALLY!”
Seeing William’s enthusiasm about a mission made Shellfish smile. “I can sense the Princess’ presence near or in the castle. You are going to search the castle for the princess,”
“WHAT?! We’re against hundreds of guards and weapons. AWESOME!”
“Did I mention you are not storming the castle, you are going to try and not get detected during the mission,”
“Oh great…”
“So you will inform the rest?”
“Will do!”
“Ok William then I will see you soon.”
“Yeah soon!”
New character YAY! lol for those of you who didnt get it Rage is like his nickname more like captain fish for james and mimi for minona his real name is lance. Also i had to point out that Rage referred to Mimi as Mi. Just found that cute so i added it :P! Also this i got carried away writing this so ill have to divide it into two chapters! lol ill try to get the second one up tomorrow! Am luvin writing this and i hope ur luvin reading this! xoxo zuzu
Rage walked out of the bar and across the side path to his bike. Yeah that was enough drinking for one day though he felt like he could drink forever. He saw a group of guys gathering around a girl. ‘Ah shit those guys don’t learn the first time I teach them a lesson’ He cracked his knuckles and walked over, ‘This time I’ll give em’ a real beating.’
“Hey girl, what you doing all alone out here at night?” One of the guys asked.
“Staying away from you!” The girl replied.
“Well you’re not doing a very good jo—“ He was knocked unconscious by Rage’s first blow. Within a few seconds all the guys were on the ground shivering or out cold. “Damn bastards.”
Rage looked over to the girl, “You alright?”
“Yeah I’m fine.”
“Do you want me to take you home?”
“I—“
“You don’t gotta be scared come lets get you outta here,”
When they reached he volunteered to walk her to the door. “Umm thank you for helping me back there…”
Rage tried to look indifferent, “It was no problem.”
“What is your name?”
“Rage.”
“Is that your real name?”
“Lance but I prefer rage,”
“OK Rage Thank You,”
After dropping the grateful girl off to her place he walked down another few lanes to find his bike. His alcohol was starting to wear off but he could ride a bike no matter how drunk he was. He rode to his small apartment and walked in. It was extremely tiny and the place was dump. Well you kind of expected that from a guy like him. He lay down on his bed and sighed in frustration. ‘This is gay. Dammit this means a one way ticket to the geek squad. Well at least the Mutiny aint as bad as this apartment and plus Mi’s going to be there. Haven’t seen her in a while...’
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William drove over to Shellfish’s hideout. Why had she called him there? Wouldn’t it usually be Mimi or even Nate? When he reached the place he rung the bell and waited outside. Shellfish opened the door and invited him in.
“Take a seat William,”
He sat down, “What’s up Shell haven’t had one of these conferences with you in ages,”
“I decided that at the time you would be the best person to talk to,”
“Why Mimi-“
“Mimi has a lot on her mind and I think we should get to the topic. I have told you about the chosen 11. I have still yet to find the 11. And I am eager to get the group essembled before this war goes too far,”
“But we don’t have any idea, we know lot’s of people but how are we going to know if they are the chosen ones?”
“We can’t be sure until all the 11 are together.”
“But right now we only have 8 people on the gang and for all we know half of them might not be the right people.”
“When we have 11 people I will be able to tell if they are chosen. Afterall I am alive for that very purpose. To guide the 11, though I’m not doing a good job.”
“No you’re doing an excellent Job. The problem is we are just sitting around doing nothing. We should be on a mission, looking for the rest of the gang.”
“I am afraid the chosen will find each other rather than be found, William. But I do have a mission for you.”
“FINALLY!”
Seeing William’s enthusiasm about a mission made Shellfish smile. “I can sense the Princess’ presence near or in the castle. You are going to search the castle for the princess,”
“WHAT?! We’re against hundreds of guards and weapons. AWESOME!”
“Did I mention you are not storming the castle, you are going to try and not get detected during the mission,”
“Oh great…”
“So you will inform the rest?”
“Will do!”
“Ok William then I will see you soon.”
“Yeah soon!”
New character YAY! lol for those of you who didnt get it Rage is like his nickname more like captain fish for james and mimi for minona his real name is lance. Also i had to point out that Rage referred to Mimi as Mi. Just found that cute so i added it :P! Also this i got carried away writing this so ill have to divide it into two chapters! lol ill try to get the second one up tomorrow! Am luvin writing this and i hope ur luvin reading this! xoxo zuzu
Sunday, November 30, 2008
What's the name of this story - Chapter 16
Chapter 16- The legacy
‘11 beings together conquerors of the evil’ That was the legacy and Shellfish had studied it over and over. She had read it millions of times. ‘If history shall repeat itself the land will take vengeance from those who roam it’
History couldn’t repeat itself, not this time. Four hundred years ago 11 young heroes, each with flaws and each with strengths stood up to the evil that roamed the earth. Slavery, injustice, violence, wars, cruelty, these evils walked the land. 11 stood up to fight these evils and to save the world because when the Earth’s peace is disturbed the Earth took its revenge on the people who disturbed it.
Last time the 11 had failed, they fell apart into the ashes of their own fatal flaws and the land crumbled. The Earth had its revenge. The land broke down until nothing remained on the Earth except water, just water. The only land remaining on the planet was mountains or volcanoes and tiny islands which could fit no more than a few hundred people. The people of the world died. Only few managed to survive, only those who had any land to live on. Slowly the remaining life on Earth adapted to the water and now 400 years later this had all started again. The wars, the violence it had to end and the 11 people to do it were yet to be all found. If this time the Earth was disturbed there would be no water.. There would be nothing except for burning lava and fire and no life would remain, the world would end.
Shellfish pulled her hair in frustrations. ‘Who are all of these people? How do I know which ones are the chosen 11? What if the whole Mutiny is a fake?!’ This time if the mutiny split there were no second chances. Life would end and wouldn’t be able to start again. If the mutiny’s bonds fell apart the world will fall apart too.
…………………………
Astaroche came and sat next to Nate. “Hey,” she said in her usual cheery voice.
“Hi…”
“What’s wrong hun?”
“Nothing…”
“Umm Nate I have to talk to you about something…”
“Sure go ahead,” He said with a small smile
“Umm I want you to know that three years back…” He frowned, “I was confused and depressed. I couldn’t handle being In a relationship. It wasn’t anything to do with you. It was never anything to do with you. You are a wonderful and caring guy. I’m sorry if I hurt you or if I wasn’t clear and its ok if you have moved on and found someone else or if you and Mimi are back together..”
“No Mimi and I don’t have much right now…”
“Oh ok…” There was silence but it wasn’t awkward. Both of them were lost in thought until Astaroche recollected herself. She moved closer to him.
“Have you forgiven me?”
“I was never mad…”
“I’m really happy now. It had been bothering me for so long.”
“ASTAROCHE! Get over here and fix you room! I’m not sharing the room with you anymore if you leave your clothes and makeup lying around everywhere! And what the fuck is your bra doing on my bed! Get over here now!” Eminence yelled from her room loud enough for the whole house to hear.
Astaroche blushed like a tomato and Nate laughed out loud. “I think I have to go…” She pecked him on the cheek and went to the room. Nate sat there feeling slightly guilty that he had allowed her to kiss him.
‘11 beings together conquerors of the evil’ That was the legacy and Shellfish had studied it over and over. She had read it millions of times. ‘If history shall repeat itself the land will take vengeance from those who roam it’
History couldn’t repeat itself, not this time. Four hundred years ago 11 young heroes, each with flaws and each with strengths stood up to the evil that roamed the earth. Slavery, injustice, violence, wars, cruelty, these evils walked the land. 11 stood up to fight these evils and to save the world because when the Earth’s peace is disturbed the Earth took its revenge on the people who disturbed it.
Last time the 11 had failed, they fell apart into the ashes of their own fatal flaws and the land crumbled. The Earth had its revenge. The land broke down until nothing remained on the Earth except water, just water. The only land remaining on the planet was mountains or volcanoes and tiny islands which could fit no more than a few hundred people. The people of the world died. Only few managed to survive, only those who had any land to live on. Slowly the remaining life on Earth adapted to the water and now 400 years later this had all started again. The wars, the violence it had to end and the 11 people to do it were yet to be all found. If this time the Earth was disturbed there would be no water.. There would be nothing except for burning lava and fire and no life would remain, the world would end.
Shellfish pulled her hair in frustrations. ‘Who are all of these people? How do I know which ones are the chosen 11? What if the whole Mutiny is a fake?!’ This time if the mutiny split there were no second chances. Life would end and wouldn’t be able to start again. If the mutiny’s bonds fell apart the world will fall apart too.
…………………………
Astaroche came and sat next to Nate. “Hey,” she said in her usual cheery voice.
“Hi…”
“What’s wrong hun?”
“Nothing…”
“Umm Nate I have to talk to you about something…”
“Sure go ahead,” He said with a small smile
“Umm I want you to know that three years back…” He frowned, “I was confused and depressed. I couldn’t handle being In a relationship. It wasn’t anything to do with you. It was never anything to do with you. You are a wonderful and caring guy. I’m sorry if I hurt you or if I wasn’t clear and its ok if you have moved on and found someone else or if you and Mimi are back together..”
“No Mimi and I don’t have much right now…”
“Oh ok…” There was silence but it wasn’t awkward. Both of them were lost in thought until Astaroche recollected herself. She moved closer to him.
“Have you forgiven me?”
“I was never mad…”
“I’m really happy now. It had been bothering me for so long.”
“ASTAROCHE! Get over here and fix you room! I’m not sharing the room with you anymore if you leave your clothes and makeup lying around everywhere! And what the fuck is your bra doing on my bed! Get over here now!” Eminence yelled from her room loud enough for the whole house to hear.
Astaroche blushed like a tomato and Nate laughed out loud. “I think I have to go…” She pecked him on the cheek and went to the room. Nate sat there feeling slightly guilty that he had allowed her to kiss him.
Wednesday, November 26, 2008
What's the name of this story - Chapter 15
Chapter 15- Not your average Joe?
Angela was proud of herself. She had stolen Jack right from the arms of that…that Pange bitch. First thing she needed to do was to get her away from her Jack. Her Jack…It sounded good. So it was decided Jack sitting on the throne right next to her, listening to everything she said, doing whatever she asked. ‘But what if he betrayed you?’
Why would he betray me he never has?
‘Power, wealth, servants these thinges change people’
But I haven’t changed…
‘Don’t go there…’
Ok but still Jack wouldn’t do that
‘What if with the power of a King he did what he wanted? Bombed the wrong town? Killed the wrong people’
He can do whatever he pleases because he is my King so long as it doesn’t affect me…
‘Maybe you should rethink this’
I banish you from corrupting my mind
‘You can’t banish me…I’ll be back’
What the hell was she thinking. She was arguing with herself over Jack. Jack had never put a finger out of line. He could never betray her. Recently she had been a bit cautious about him. Only because he had was acting differently. He might have been upset because he was put at the rank of a measily guard. Now he is a captain and he deserves it. After all she had known him for nearly 10 years and after last night only he can be her king. She smiled to herself remembering how fanatical that kiss was. She had to go see him again…Now!
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Valeria walked up to the cottage sized house. She thought about this once more and decided she had chosen the right thing to do. She knocked at the door.
Inside William was smoking a seagarette with the the rest crowded around. “It’s great that we finally have a roof about our heads isn’t it?”
“William stop smoking that! You know I hate it when you smoke.”
“But darling I’ve cut down so many!”
“Well cut them all down!” Mimi interrupted angrily.
“Ok Ok.” He dropped the cigarette on the floor and stomped on it. What was she angry about anyway she never seems to smile these days.
“Don’t do that! You’ll damage the flooring!” Eminence exclaimed
“What’s with you women always instructing me on what to do?”
“Men who can look after themselves don’t need to be instructed,” James said loading his hand-gun with the latest bullets he invented.
“You Shutup! I don’t need that crap from you too!”
“What did you say?” James said. They all heard a knock at the door and came to a stop. Out side Valeria stood feeling awkward. She had expected a much more homier environment from what Shellfish had told her but she had just come in during an argument.
Eminence opened the door looking like she was ready to punch who ever was outside right in the face. Valeria took a step back for safety.
“Who are you?”
“I’m Valeria..uhh Shellfish sent me here”
“Shellfish?” Mimi stood up and asked. Valeria nodded and Mimi asked her to come in and sit down.
“Shellfish told me you were some kind of rebel group called the mutiny or something…And she asked me to join”
Mimi put on her comforting smile, “We ain’t rebels. We’re more like freedom fighters I guess or let’s just say we’re the good side.”
“Is there such thing as the good side?”
“We’re the closest you can get.”
“Whoa wait a second. Why would Shellfish pick you out of all people to join the Mutiny? You don’t look that special well let’s see you have what are they daggers?” William interrupted.
Yuffie wacked William across the head, “Stop being so rude!”
“Well for your information I’m not your average Joe. And these are legendary swords past down from my ancestors unlike any army swords or guns.”
“Not you average Joe huh? I like your attitude. Welcome to the team Girl.”
Mimi put her hand forward and Valeria confidentely shaked it. “James show Valeria to the extra room we have and take he bags,”
Angela was proud of herself. She had stolen Jack right from the arms of that…that Pange bitch. First thing she needed to do was to get her away from her Jack. Her Jack…It sounded good. So it was decided Jack sitting on the throne right next to her, listening to everything she said, doing whatever she asked. ‘But what if he betrayed you?’
Why would he betray me he never has?
‘Power, wealth, servants these thinges change people’
But I haven’t changed…
‘Don’t go there…’
Ok but still Jack wouldn’t do that
‘What if with the power of a King he did what he wanted? Bombed the wrong town? Killed the wrong people’
He can do whatever he pleases because he is my King so long as it doesn’t affect me…
‘Maybe you should rethink this’
I banish you from corrupting my mind
‘You can’t banish me…I’ll be back’
What the hell was she thinking. She was arguing with herself over Jack. Jack had never put a finger out of line. He could never betray her. Recently she had been a bit cautious about him. Only because he had was acting differently. He might have been upset because he was put at the rank of a measily guard. Now he is a captain and he deserves it. After all she had known him for nearly 10 years and after last night only he can be her king. She smiled to herself remembering how fanatical that kiss was. She had to go see him again…Now!
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Valeria walked up to the cottage sized house. She thought about this once more and decided she had chosen the right thing to do. She knocked at the door.
Inside William was smoking a seagarette with the the rest crowded around. “It’s great that we finally have a roof about our heads isn’t it?”
“William stop smoking that! You know I hate it when you smoke.”
“But darling I’ve cut down so many!”
“Well cut them all down!” Mimi interrupted angrily.
“Ok Ok.” He dropped the cigarette on the floor and stomped on it. What was she angry about anyway she never seems to smile these days.
“Don’t do that! You’ll damage the flooring!” Eminence exclaimed
“What’s with you women always instructing me on what to do?”
“Men who can look after themselves don’t need to be instructed,” James said loading his hand-gun with the latest bullets he invented.
“You Shutup! I don’t need that crap from you too!”
“What did you say?” James said. They all heard a knock at the door and came to a stop. Out side Valeria stood feeling awkward. She had expected a much more homier environment from what Shellfish had told her but she had just come in during an argument.
Eminence opened the door looking like she was ready to punch who ever was outside right in the face. Valeria took a step back for safety.
“Who are you?”
“I’m Valeria..uhh Shellfish sent me here”
“Shellfish?” Mimi stood up and asked. Valeria nodded and Mimi asked her to come in and sit down.
“Shellfish told me you were some kind of rebel group called the mutiny or something…And she asked me to join”
Mimi put on her comforting smile, “We ain’t rebels. We’re more like freedom fighters I guess or let’s just say we’re the good side.”
“Is there such thing as the good side?”
“We’re the closest you can get.”
“Whoa wait a second. Why would Shellfish pick you out of all people to join the Mutiny? You don’t look that special well let’s see you have what are they daggers?” William interrupted.
Yuffie wacked William across the head, “Stop being so rude!”
“Well for your information I’m not your average Joe. And these are legendary swords past down from my ancestors unlike any army swords or guns.”
“Not you average Joe huh? I like your attitude. Welcome to the team Girl.”
Mimi put her hand forward and Valeria confidentely shaked it. “James show Valeria to the extra room we have and take he bags,”
Tuesday, November 25, 2008
What's the name of this story- Chapter 14
Chapter 14- Love is in the air...err...sea?
Nate was lying on the seabed staring at the lights coming through the water from the world above and drinking beer. The sky above was quite beautiful but if you stared at it too long it would make you dizzy. That was exactly what was happening to Nate but he didn’t want to look away. He was thinking about his life and all the mistakes he had made. For once he didn’t want to think about Mimi because it would only make him want to go to her. Frankly, Mimi was quite cranky these days and there was a fair chance she’d beat him up, which was partly his fault too.
He decided that he should give in for the day and decided to head for his tent. His head was dizzy from staring at the sky and the beer didn’t help much. He walked to his ten and bumped into Astaroche.
“Huh, What?” She hadn’t been expecting that but looking at the state of Nate she couldn’t help but smirk and giggle lightly.
“What are you doing at my tent?”
“Silly this is my tent. The Question is what are you doing near my tent?” She whispered in his ear.
“Where’s my tent?”
“What’s the hurry?” She got closer but even in this condition Nate knew he had to push her away.
“If you would please point in the direction of my tent, it would be great.”
“Sure hun, its 3 tents left of mine.”
“Thanks.” He said and started walking away.
“Oh and I wouldn’t mind if you came back for another visit soon!” She said.
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It was 8 o’clock and Jack stood leaned on the side of the fountain lost deep in thought. It was a 5 minutes past 8 and Pange sneaked up on Jack from the behind and put her arms right around him. Jack took a step back in shock and Pange’s smile widened.
“Didn’t think you could sneak up on someone like you…”
“Well you were proven wrong I guess.” He said with a tiniest smile he could form.
“You seem a bit dazed. Thinking about something important?”
“Yeah I guess…”
“Something you would like to share?” She put her arms around his neck and he started to feel uncomfortable.
“Not really that important now that I come to think of ….”
“Not even with your personal assistant?”
“Umm…”
“Pange!” Angela said in her loud-standard voice. Pange immediately stood with her hands by her side and they both bowed.
“Aren’t you meant to be on duty right now?”
“No I just had a break…”
“Well the floor polishing on the left side of my 2nd bathroom is a bit dull. See to it that it is shining the next time I see it.”
“Yes ofcourse,” She bowed and walked off glancing once at Jack.
“You know I don’t like it when you do that…”
“I’m sorry but I don’t know what you’re…”
“When you bow down to me and stuff… You know that’s only for those other lowlifes Jack. Your different Jack…”
Jack was in a state of panic. ‘Uh oh she hasn’t talked to me like that like since….forever!’
Angela could see the confusion in Jack’s face. “Calm down. I’m not here to give you a new important task or something. I’m just here to talk to you.”
A smile came at Jack’s mouth when she said. ‘Just talk to him, tough chance!’ Angela mistook that smile for Jack loosening up a bit. He guestured her to sit down and they sat side by side. This reminded him of the time he had first met her. A young girl abandoned in the sea when his father brought her to the surface where they met. They were both pirates. The first time they had met she was actually quite scared and would follow him around everywhere. He remembered on her first day on the ship she was sitting just like this with her hands around him and his hand lightly around her waist. Unconciously that was what Jack had just done. He put his hand around her waist and She brought both her hands around him.
‘Wait a second there, that was what 10 years ago?! She wasn’t wicked evil power-hungry maniac then. Take your hands off her now or she’ll get ideas!!!’
Angela smiled in her usual slightly evil but flirty way and said, “I like it when your informal around me.”
She moved up and pecked him lightly on the lips but staying there waiting for a response. Jack’s instincts kicked and he wrapped both his hands around her pashing her gently. Angela brought her hands up and her fingers tangled in his hair. They broke apart and looked at each other. Angela wore her usual smile and Jack had finally realized what he had done.
‘Well it’s about time you realized! YOU JUST BLOODY KISSED HER!’
I had fun writing this chapter :D lol but it is very twisted is it not? Its gonna twist more so keep reading. Luving writing this story and luving u! xoxo Zuzu
Nate was lying on the seabed staring at the lights coming through the water from the world above and drinking beer. The sky above was quite beautiful but if you stared at it too long it would make you dizzy. That was exactly what was happening to Nate but he didn’t want to look away. He was thinking about his life and all the mistakes he had made. For once he didn’t want to think about Mimi because it would only make him want to go to her. Frankly, Mimi was quite cranky these days and there was a fair chance she’d beat him up, which was partly his fault too.
He decided that he should give in for the day and decided to head for his tent. His head was dizzy from staring at the sky and the beer didn’t help much. He walked to his ten and bumped into Astaroche.
“Huh, What?” She hadn’t been expecting that but looking at the state of Nate she couldn’t help but smirk and giggle lightly.
“What are you doing at my tent?”
“Silly this is my tent. The Question is what are you doing near my tent?” She whispered in his ear.
“Where’s my tent?”
“What’s the hurry?” She got closer but even in this condition Nate knew he had to push her away.
“If you would please point in the direction of my tent, it would be great.”
“Sure hun, its 3 tents left of mine.”
“Thanks.” He said and started walking away.
“Oh and I wouldn’t mind if you came back for another visit soon!” She said.
…………………………………
It was 8 o’clock and Jack stood leaned on the side of the fountain lost deep in thought. It was a 5 minutes past 8 and Pange sneaked up on Jack from the behind and put her arms right around him. Jack took a step back in shock and Pange’s smile widened.
“Didn’t think you could sneak up on someone like you…”
“Well you were proven wrong I guess.” He said with a tiniest smile he could form.
“You seem a bit dazed. Thinking about something important?”
“Yeah I guess…”
“Something you would like to share?” She put her arms around his neck and he started to feel uncomfortable.
“Not really that important now that I come to think of ….”
“Not even with your personal assistant?”
“Umm…”
“Pange!” Angela said in her loud-standard voice. Pange immediately stood with her hands by her side and they both bowed.
“Aren’t you meant to be on duty right now?”
“No I just had a break…”
“Well the floor polishing on the left side of my 2nd bathroom is a bit dull. See to it that it is shining the next time I see it.”
“Yes ofcourse,” She bowed and walked off glancing once at Jack.
“You know I don’t like it when you do that…”
“I’m sorry but I don’t know what you’re…”
“When you bow down to me and stuff… You know that’s only for those other lowlifes Jack. Your different Jack…”
Jack was in a state of panic. ‘Uh oh she hasn’t talked to me like that like since….forever!’
Angela could see the confusion in Jack’s face. “Calm down. I’m not here to give you a new important task or something. I’m just here to talk to you.”
A smile came at Jack’s mouth when she said. ‘Just talk to him, tough chance!’ Angela mistook that smile for Jack loosening up a bit. He guestured her to sit down and they sat side by side. This reminded him of the time he had first met her. A young girl abandoned in the sea when his father brought her to the surface where they met. They were both pirates. The first time they had met she was actually quite scared and would follow him around everywhere. He remembered on her first day on the ship she was sitting just like this with her hands around him and his hand lightly around her waist. Unconciously that was what Jack had just done. He put his hand around her waist and She brought both her hands around him.
‘Wait a second there, that was what 10 years ago?! She wasn’t wicked evil power-hungry maniac then. Take your hands off her now or she’ll get ideas!!!’
Angela smiled in her usual slightly evil but flirty way and said, “I like it when your informal around me.”
She moved up and pecked him lightly on the lips but staying there waiting for a response. Jack’s instincts kicked and he wrapped both his hands around her pashing her gently. Angela brought her hands up and her fingers tangled in his hair. They broke apart and looked at each other. Angela wore her usual smile and Jack had finally realized what he had done.
‘Well it’s about time you realized! YOU JUST BLOODY KISSED HER!’
I had fun writing this chapter :D lol but it is very twisted is it not? Its gonna twist more so keep reading. Luving writing this story and luving u! xoxo Zuzu
Sunday, November 23, 2008
What's the name of this story- Chapter 13
Chapter 13 – A rush of badluck“Hello Everyone,” Astaroche said with a fake smile. Nate’s heart was pounding. Astaroche winked towards Nate and Nate turned to look at Mimi. ‘Phew Mimi hasn’t notice the looks Astaroche is giving me’. Truth was Mimi had noticed but it didn’t matter, not to her anyway.
Shellfish walked up to Eminence and Captain Fish and introduced herself. She shook hands with Eminence and James (Captain Fish’s real name will be used more often now) and talked to them a little about their own experiences and own quest to find Madeline. “So do you know where Madeline might be?” James asked eagerly.
“No I don’t. She is in a location where my Telepathy cannot make any contact that or…”
“No she’s not dead…”
“I don’t think so either.”
“So what are we going to do? What do you want us to do?” Eminence asked.
“Astaroche has special abilities. When she touches a belonging of someone she can automatically find where the owner is. It is like a seadog can track down things with the use of scent.”
“But we don’t have anything that belongs to Madeline,”
“Hmm…” Shellfish said and walked off.
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“We should hurry up!” Jack said and held Madeline’s hand as they ran.
“I’m running as fast as I can!” Madeline’s body was covered in bruises from the torture Angela had given her. She fell to the ground. “I’m sorry, I just need to catch my breath.”
“No Time!” Jack lifted her into his arms and ran through a series of corridors. Madeline felt so helpless it made her want to cry. She shifted closer to him and gripped on to his shirt.
“Jack I think I can walk now,”
He placed her down and then they ran. But then Jack stopped dead in front of the exit and gripped her tighter with a hint of roughness.
“Ouch!” Madeline said.
Pange appeared through the darkness. She walked towards Madeline and Jack clapping her hands. “So you managed to get through all the guards hey? But too bad for you, you bumped into Jack. Well done Jack you caught her from running away.” Madeline looked questionably at Jack who wore a serious face, not looking towards Madeline and showing no emotion whatsoever.
“Of course has anyone ever gotten past me?” Jack said with a fake pride.
“Well let’s dump her back in prison and inform Angela. Then we can talk.”
Pange handcuffed Madeline and said, “I’ll take it from here. See you at 8 near the fountain. I have to talk to you about something.”
“Something Angela said?”
“We’ll talk about it then…”
She walked out and Madeline gave Jack a poisonous look. It stung him. He felt as a bolt of electricity had entered struck his heart. He watched her being carried away.
…………………………
Chase heard a guard yelling outside and then his cry faded away. He stood up and looked at the entrance. The doors bust open and he saw Valeria walking in towards him. He sat back down. “Not even going to bow down to your king? How shameful…You know I can send you to prison for that…But you’re not someone ordinary to me, you…”
“Shut up.” Chase grinned but kept quiet.
“I’m here to say that I am leaving your kingdom and my duties to you behind. She got her badge from her pocket and threw it to the ground, stepping on it and crushing it to bits. “And that there was nothing ever between us, ever!”
Chase decided it was his turn to speak now. “On the contrary Ria, there was always something between us. Otherwise you wouldn’t have mentioned it.”
Valeria . Chase walked down from his thrown stroked her face. “You think otherwise,darling?” He leant in closer but Valeria pushed him away. “Get away from me you asshole! Don’t you dare touch me!”
“Ok darling whatever you say.”
“Don’t call me darling.”
“And it’s over.”
“But you said there was nothing to begin with.” He said with a smirk.
“There wasn’t.” She said and walked off.
Hope you liked it. Sorry got lots of homework next update will be tomorrow definitely! xoxo Zuzu
Shellfish walked up to Eminence and Captain Fish and introduced herself. She shook hands with Eminence and James (Captain Fish’s real name will be used more often now) and talked to them a little about their own experiences and own quest to find Madeline. “So do you know where Madeline might be?” James asked eagerly.
“No I don’t. She is in a location where my Telepathy cannot make any contact that or…”
“No she’s not dead…”
“I don’t think so either.”
“So what are we going to do? What do you want us to do?” Eminence asked.
“Astaroche has special abilities. When she touches a belonging of someone she can automatically find where the owner is. It is like a seadog can track down things with the use of scent.”
“But we don’t have anything that belongs to Madeline,”
“Hmm…” Shellfish said and walked off.
……………………………
“We should hurry up!” Jack said and held Madeline’s hand as they ran.
“I’m running as fast as I can!” Madeline’s body was covered in bruises from the torture Angela had given her. She fell to the ground. “I’m sorry, I just need to catch my breath.”
“No Time!” Jack lifted her into his arms and ran through a series of corridors. Madeline felt so helpless it made her want to cry. She shifted closer to him and gripped on to his shirt.
“Jack I think I can walk now,”
He placed her down and then they ran. But then Jack stopped dead in front of the exit and gripped her tighter with a hint of roughness.
“Ouch!” Madeline said.
Pange appeared through the darkness. She walked towards Madeline and Jack clapping her hands. “So you managed to get through all the guards hey? But too bad for you, you bumped into Jack. Well done Jack you caught her from running away.” Madeline looked questionably at Jack who wore a serious face, not looking towards Madeline and showing no emotion whatsoever.
“Of course has anyone ever gotten past me?” Jack said with a fake pride.
“Well let’s dump her back in prison and inform Angela. Then we can talk.”
Pange handcuffed Madeline and said, “I’ll take it from here. See you at 8 near the fountain. I have to talk to you about something.”
“Something Angela said?”
“We’ll talk about it then…”
She walked out and Madeline gave Jack a poisonous look. It stung him. He felt as a bolt of electricity had entered struck his heart. He watched her being carried away.
…………………………
Chase heard a guard yelling outside and then his cry faded away. He stood up and looked at the entrance. The doors bust open and he saw Valeria walking in towards him. He sat back down. “Not even going to bow down to your king? How shameful…You know I can send you to prison for that…But you’re not someone ordinary to me, you…”
“Shut up.” Chase grinned but kept quiet.
“I’m here to say that I am leaving your kingdom and my duties to you behind. She got her badge from her pocket and threw it to the ground, stepping on it and crushing it to bits. “And that there was nothing ever between us, ever!”
Chase decided it was his turn to speak now. “On the contrary Ria, there was always something between us. Otherwise you wouldn’t have mentioned it.”
Valeria . Chase walked down from his thrown stroked her face. “You think otherwise,darling?” He leant in closer but Valeria pushed him away. “Get away from me you asshole! Don’t you dare touch me!”
“Ok darling whatever you say.”
“Don’t call me darling.”
“And it’s over.”
“But you said there was nothing to begin with.” He said with a smirk.
“There wasn’t.” She said and walked off.
Hope you liked it. Sorry got lots of homework next update will be tomorrow definitely! xoxo Zuzu
Wednesday, November 19, 2008
What's the name of this story- Chapter 12 (extra long version)
Chapter 12“What’s this Jack?”
“It’s my ID card that I use to get into this cave. You can use it to get out tonight,”
“Tonight?”
“Yeah I’ll meet you by the hall next to the supply entrance. You use this card to get out and meet me there. By then I will have the supply entrance open for some incoming cargo and we’ll sneak out together.”
“Thank You,”
“For what?”
“Because your sacrificing everything you have for me. You’re even Captain now, you didn’t have to do this. You could live your life with wealth and servants but you’re helping me.”
Jack held her closer to his chest and Madeline instinctively brought her hands around his shoulders and dug her fingers into his hair. Jack could feel her breathing on his skin they just stayed that way for a while.
“No Thank Yous needed. I’m doing this because I want to.”
…………………………
Yuffie sat outside in broad daylight huddled in William’s arms. William had dosed off to sleep. It was a while since they had had any rest. She thought about her life in particular the only remaining family member she had…her brother. When she got arrested Chase had surely received the news. He had then started attacks of Pufflanta but then stopped due to an agreement between Angela and himself. He was willing to leave her in that prison. Did that mean that she wasn’t needed anymore. That the royal family didn’t want her? At that thought tears came to her eyes and she made a muffled sound that woke William up. Yuffie quickly blinked back the tears.
“Huh, Yuffie what’s wrong?”
“Nothing…just tired”
“Don’t try to lie. I can tell that your hurt. Tell me what’s wrong?” He kissed her lightly and asked her again, “Tell me what’s wrong, please?”
At that Yuffie burst into tears. William was shocked. He had never seen her like this and he wondered if it was his fault. “It’s ok. You can cry, just let it all out.” Yuffie rested her head on William’s shoulder and tried to stop crying but the tears would just come. William tried to kiss the tears away. By the time he had finally managed to make her stop crying half his shirt was soaked.
“Are you done?”
She nodded her head and looked down ashamed after she realized what she had done to his shirt. “So now you’re going to tell me what’s wrong?”
She explained everything. How she was unwanted. William listened to every word. “Yuffie darling, you are not unwanted. For me you’re the only thing I ever wanted and will want. And King Chase was your brother. I know it is really hard for you because we are fighting against him but you do realize it’s all for the better good. It doesn’t matter whether he wants you or not. All that matters is that I do more than anything in the world.”
His words healed her. He had always had that effect on her. “And now if you don’t mind I think I need to change my shirt and someone needs to drink a little more water. They seem to have lost a lot of it.” Yuffie looked at his shirt again and smiled then blushed lightly. He placed a quick peck on her cheek and walked off.
………………………
In the evening Willaim was sitting by the fire alone when he saw someone approaching. It was Shellfish. “William, you look well.”
“Shellfish?! Oh my god it’s been so long!”
“Yeah it’s been too long!” Shellfish hugged William and said, “ I have also brought with me someone…”
“Oh just wait a sec,” William said, “GUYS WE HAVE A VISITOR!!!!!” He called out to the gang.
Everyone came out of their tents. “SHELLFISH!!!!” Mimi said as she ran and hugged her.
“I see you’re as happy and cheery as ever.”
“Na it’s just cause I haven’t seen you in such a long time. Oh my God and you even got a new Group Uniform!! Girl you have the best fashion sense I swear!”
“Yeah umm well I came here to introduce you to a new team member..well an old new team member. You can come now” She instructed.
“Astaroche?” Nate said in a taken aback tone.
………………………
It was 7pm. Jack had told Madeline to leave the cave about now. She got up and went up the secured elavators and headed down a series of corridors. She was nearly spotted by one of the guards but managed to slip by.
She made her way through the corridor and ran straight into a guard. “Who are you?! Are you a prisoner.” Madeline landed on her feet. The guard reached forward and fell to the the ground. Behind him stood Jack with a grin on his face. “How did you knock him out?”
“Just a few tricks I know…Lets go!”
……………………..
“Yes Pange?”
“I have heard news that there is a rebel group built against your rule over this kingdom. They know you are Angela and they are plotting to take you down.”
“Well it isn’t that easy to take Angela down. Put wanted poster of this ‘group’ everywhere. And put wanted DEAD on the posters if you don’t mind?”
“Of course but we don’t know what they look like…”
“Well do they have a group name of some sort? Any identification?”
“They call themselves the Mutiny,”
“Well then that will do for the posters for now. You may be excused.” Pange bowed and walked out of the room.
‘The mutiny ey?’ Angela thought, ‘Catch me if you can…’
Well there you have it. I hope your enjoying it! And this was extra long just for Guru so don't get use to it guys i wont write this much everyday! Well love u all xoxo zuzu P.S. KEEP READING OR ILL EAT YOU!
“It’s my ID card that I use to get into this cave. You can use it to get out tonight,”
“Tonight?”
“Yeah I’ll meet you by the hall next to the supply entrance. You use this card to get out and meet me there. By then I will have the supply entrance open for some incoming cargo and we’ll sneak out together.”
“Thank You,”
“For what?”
“Because your sacrificing everything you have for me. You’re even Captain now, you didn’t have to do this. You could live your life with wealth and servants but you’re helping me.”
Jack held her closer to his chest and Madeline instinctively brought her hands around his shoulders and dug her fingers into his hair. Jack could feel her breathing on his skin they just stayed that way for a while.
“No Thank Yous needed. I’m doing this because I want to.”
…………………………
Yuffie sat outside in broad daylight huddled in William’s arms. William had dosed off to sleep. It was a while since they had had any rest. She thought about her life in particular the only remaining family member she had…her brother. When she got arrested Chase had surely received the news. He had then started attacks of Pufflanta but then stopped due to an agreement between Angela and himself. He was willing to leave her in that prison. Did that mean that she wasn’t needed anymore. That the royal family didn’t want her? At that thought tears came to her eyes and she made a muffled sound that woke William up. Yuffie quickly blinked back the tears.
“Huh, Yuffie what’s wrong?”
“Nothing…just tired”
“Don’t try to lie. I can tell that your hurt. Tell me what’s wrong?” He kissed her lightly and asked her again, “Tell me what’s wrong, please?”
At that Yuffie burst into tears. William was shocked. He had never seen her like this and he wondered if it was his fault. “It’s ok. You can cry, just let it all out.” Yuffie rested her head on William’s shoulder and tried to stop crying but the tears would just come. William tried to kiss the tears away. By the time he had finally managed to make her stop crying half his shirt was soaked.
“Are you done?”
She nodded her head and looked down ashamed after she realized what she had done to his shirt. “So now you’re going to tell me what’s wrong?”
She explained everything. How she was unwanted. William listened to every word. “Yuffie darling, you are not unwanted. For me you’re the only thing I ever wanted and will want. And King Chase was your brother. I know it is really hard for you because we are fighting against him but you do realize it’s all for the better good. It doesn’t matter whether he wants you or not. All that matters is that I do more than anything in the world.”
His words healed her. He had always had that effect on her. “And now if you don’t mind I think I need to change my shirt and someone needs to drink a little more water. They seem to have lost a lot of it.” Yuffie looked at his shirt again and smiled then blushed lightly. He placed a quick peck on her cheek and walked off.
………………………
In the evening Willaim was sitting by the fire alone when he saw someone approaching. It was Shellfish. “William, you look well.”
“Shellfish?! Oh my god it’s been so long!”
“Yeah it’s been too long!” Shellfish hugged William and said, “ I have also brought with me someone…”
“Oh just wait a sec,” William said, “GUYS WE HAVE A VISITOR!!!!!” He called out to the gang.
Everyone came out of their tents. “SHELLFISH!!!!” Mimi said as she ran and hugged her.
“I see you’re as happy and cheery as ever.”
“Na it’s just cause I haven’t seen you in such a long time. Oh my God and you even got a new Group Uniform!! Girl you have the best fashion sense I swear!”
“Yeah umm well I came here to introduce you to a new team member..well an old new team member. You can come now” She instructed.
“Astaroche?” Nate said in a taken aback tone.
………………………
It was 7pm. Jack had told Madeline to leave the cave about now. She got up and went up the secured elavators and headed down a series of corridors. She was nearly spotted by one of the guards but managed to slip by.
She made her way through the corridor and ran straight into a guard. “Who are you?! Are you a prisoner.” Madeline landed on her feet. The guard reached forward and fell to the the ground. Behind him stood Jack with a grin on his face. “How did you knock him out?”
“Just a few tricks I know…Lets go!”
……………………..
“Yes Pange?”
“I have heard news that there is a rebel group built against your rule over this kingdom. They know you are Angela and they are plotting to take you down.”
“Well it isn’t that easy to take Angela down. Put wanted poster of this ‘group’ everywhere. And put wanted DEAD on the posters if you don’t mind?”
“Of course but we don’t know what they look like…”
“Well do they have a group name of some sort? Any identification?”
“They call themselves the Mutiny,”
“Well then that will do for the posters for now. You may be excused.” Pange bowed and walked out of the room.
‘The mutiny ey?’ Angela thought, ‘Catch me if you can…’
Well there you have it. I hope your enjoying it! And this was extra long just for Guru so don't get use to it guys i wont write this much everyday! Well love u all xoxo zuzu P.S. KEEP READING OR ILL EAT YOU!
Monday, November 17, 2008
What's the name of this story?
Chapter 11
There was a slight knock at the door. Eminence stood up and looked at Captain Fish. No one knew their location…why was there someone at the door? “I’ll open the door,” Captain Fish said as he walked to the door. He got his hand gun and put it in his pocket. He opened the door to see four somewhat young figures standing in front of him.
“Yes?”
Mimi immediately recognized he was carrying a weapon of some sort.“Please don’t be Alarmed. I am Minona or Mimi as some call me. Do you mind if we have a word?”
“Come in…” He gestured. Mimi gave him a convincing smile which almost made him blush. The rest walked in quietly. Nate walked quickly to Mimi and stood right beside her getting as close to her as he could so he could show everyone that she was his. Although Mimi realized what was happening and went to site on the single seat opposite Eminence and Captain Fish. Mimi explained the current situation and what they’re task was. “I don’t think there is a reason why we shouldn’t join. After all we are fighting for the same outcome.”
“Well then you might have to pack your bags cuz we ain’t gonna stay here forever,” William said.
……………………………
Chase sat in his throne lazily. He was thinking but not about Lisa. About his fight with Angela. She was the first girl that hadn’t gone down in the first 5 minutes of fighting. Maybe it was because Chase had hardly gone for a good punch but it was just so entertaining to see her fight. Her moves were so swift and quick she was almost too good to be true. Chase then had a vision of Angela sitting right beside him in the what was right now and empty Queen’s throne. A small grin approached his face at the thought but was gone in an instant when Chase’s good conscience kicked in.
*You really are sick you know that?*
‘What?’
*Does Lisa ring a bell? Weren’t you like all over her just 2 hours ago? And now your imagining another bitch in your throne*
‘Shut up’
*Yeah Ok. But you just remember there will come a time where you’ll have to choose one. Right now you make me sick. Why did I have to be your conscience out of all the people in the world?! WHY?!”
Chase was going mad. His conscience was developing its own personality..was that normal?
‘You know conscience if you were a real person in front of me I would have you hanged’
*Then go hang yourself*
………………………………
Eminence and Captain Fish were getting along quite well with William and Yuffie but for some reason Eminence and Captain Fish didn’t seem like a couple. Who cares she thought and walked away for a stroll in the woods. She stared at the moon as she walked on and walked straight into someone. Who would’ve guessed? It was Nate.
“How was your day?” He asked
“Great”
“It would have been…”
“Why do you say so?” Mimi asked.
“Well you were checking out that Fish guy half the time.”
“I was NOT! GEEZ What is your blood problem?! Number 1 ITS OVER! Go find someone else you can use and then dump whenever you want. Number 2 I WAS NOT CHECKING ANYONE OUT! And even if I was who the hell do you think you are to contradict me about it?”
Nate grabbed her by the waist and forced her up against a tree leaving no gap whatsoever between him and Mimi. “I’m the one who loves. More than any guy ever will!” He dived in for a forced kiss and despite Mimi trying to push him away he managed with the kiss for as long as he would have liked to.
Mimi punched him straight in the stomach. He landed on the ground. “Nate you showed me exactly how much you loved me 3 years ago.” She ran her hand throught hair and then stood up straight again. “If Shellfish hadn’t assigned us on this mission I would pay not to see your face!” She said and walked away feeling slightly guilty about something she couldn’t exactly point out.
That's Chapter 11 guys. Kind of short but i've got a headache. anyway enjoy xoxo zuzu!
There was a slight knock at the door. Eminence stood up and looked at Captain Fish. No one knew their location…why was there someone at the door? “I’ll open the door,” Captain Fish said as he walked to the door. He got his hand gun and put it in his pocket. He opened the door to see four somewhat young figures standing in front of him.
“Yes?”
Mimi immediately recognized he was carrying a weapon of some sort.“Please don’t be Alarmed. I am Minona or Mimi as some call me. Do you mind if we have a word?”
“Come in…” He gestured. Mimi gave him a convincing smile which almost made him blush. The rest walked in quietly. Nate walked quickly to Mimi and stood right beside her getting as close to her as he could so he could show everyone that she was his. Although Mimi realized what was happening and went to site on the single seat opposite Eminence and Captain Fish. Mimi explained the current situation and what they’re task was. “I don’t think there is a reason why we shouldn’t join. After all we are fighting for the same outcome.”
“Well then you might have to pack your bags cuz we ain’t gonna stay here forever,” William said.
……………………………
Chase sat in his throne lazily. He was thinking but not about Lisa. About his fight with Angela. She was the first girl that hadn’t gone down in the first 5 minutes of fighting. Maybe it was because Chase had hardly gone for a good punch but it was just so entertaining to see her fight. Her moves were so swift and quick she was almost too good to be true. Chase then had a vision of Angela sitting right beside him in the what was right now and empty Queen’s throne. A small grin approached his face at the thought but was gone in an instant when Chase’s good conscience kicked in.
*You really are sick you know that?*
‘What?’
*Does Lisa ring a bell? Weren’t you like all over her just 2 hours ago? And now your imagining another bitch in your throne*
‘Shut up’
*Yeah Ok. But you just remember there will come a time where you’ll have to choose one. Right now you make me sick. Why did I have to be your conscience out of all the people in the world?! WHY?!”
Chase was going mad. His conscience was developing its own personality..was that normal?
‘You know conscience if you were a real person in front of me I would have you hanged’
*Then go hang yourself*
………………………………
Eminence and Captain Fish were getting along quite well with William and Yuffie but for some reason Eminence and Captain Fish didn’t seem like a couple. Who cares she thought and walked away for a stroll in the woods. She stared at the moon as she walked on and walked straight into someone. Who would’ve guessed? It was Nate.
“How was your day?” He asked
“Great”
“It would have been…”
“Why do you say so?” Mimi asked.
“Well you were checking out that Fish guy half the time.”
“I was NOT! GEEZ What is your blood problem?! Number 1 ITS OVER! Go find someone else you can use and then dump whenever you want. Number 2 I WAS NOT CHECKING ANYONE OUT! And even if I was who the hell do you think you are to contradict me about it?”
Nate grabbed her by the waist and forced her up against a tree leaving no gap whatsoever between him and Mimi. “I’m the one who loves. More than any guy ever will!” He dived in for a forced kiss and despite Mimi trying to push him away he managed with the kiss for as long as he would have liked to.
Mimi punched him straight in the stomach. He landed on the ground. “Nate you showed me exactly how much you loved me 3 years ago.” She ran her hand throught hair and then stood up straight again. “If Shellfish hadn’t assigned us on this mission I would pay not to see your face!” She said and walked away feeling slightly guilty about something she couldn’t exactly point out.
That's Chapter 11 guys. Kind of short but i've got a headache. anyway enjoy xoxo zuzu!
Saturday, November 15, 2008
What's the name of this story - Chapter 10
Chapter 10
“Yes Nate?”
“About that day… When I left you… I’m really…”
“Nate don’t apologise. Please it’s over. Its been over for too long. Since you ever had a relationship with that… that Astaroche girl.”
“But we ended that relationship.”
“She dumped you Nate. But before that you dumped me for that girl. Now she dumps you, you think you can come running back to me Nate? Just because I act absolutely normal in front of everyone Nate It doesn’t mean that I’m not still mad at you. I still hate you. For leaving me in the woods that night. Stranded. Alone…”
~Flashback starts~
“Nate, Why have you brought me out here?” Mimi asked with a slight giggle.
“Because I needed to talk with you . Somewhere alone where we won’t get disturbed.”
Mimi and Nate both sat down under a tree. “What was it Nate, that you wanted to say?”
“Mimi I can’t be with you anymore,” Nate said coldly
Mimi just stared unable to form any words.
“It’s because there is someone else…”
“Astroche?”
Nate nodded and stood up. “Wait where are you going?” Mimi asked.
Nate kept walking, “I told you it was over right?”
“But I don’t know the way out. Your not just gonna leave me here?!” Mimi’s hair lost its colour. It went completely white.
“Good Bye Mimi.”
~End Flashback~
“Minona I’m so sorry. If there was one thing I could go back and fix it would be…”
“Too late.” Mimi said and started to walk away.
Nate grabbed her wrists and pushed her up against a tree, “You can’t do this to me!”
Mimi freed herself from his grasp and slapped him across the face. “Don’t touch me,” She said and walked away. A tear drop slid down her face.
……………………………
Chase sat back down next to Lisa on the bed. “What did you want to talk to me about Lisa?”
‘As if you don’t already know..’ Chase told himself.
“That day, when we kissed and Valeria…”
“I am sorry about that. I think there is nothing more between Valeria and myself anymore.”
“You think?”
“I don’t know what Valeria thinks.”
“So Chase what I was trying to ask you was…”
Chase couldn’t resist it. He leaned into a kiss and this time Lisa kissed him back. They broke apart. “You were going to ask me what this meant?”
Lisa nodded.
“The truth is I don’t exactly know…” Chase held her closer to him. Her back relaxed back into his chest. She didn’t know what this meant either.
……………………………
“So what’s today’s itinerary?” William asked and then he noticed the huge grey cloud between Nate and Mimi. Mimi cleared her thoughts about last night. “Shellfish has given me the location of Princess Madeline’s two closest friends. Our job is too find them and convince them to join our team.”
“And what if they don’t want to join us?” Yuffie asked intrigued that this was her first official mission.
“Well then I always give people two choices. Do what I say the easy way or the hard way.” Mimi replied
“Geez! Who put you on the good side?” William asked.
Mimi ignored his comment, “Afterall why wouldn’t they join us. We’re doing this for the better good and stuff.”
“Hey Umm Mimi.. I have a question!” Yuffie said
“Shoot away,”
“If we’re a team what is going to be our name?”
Mimi and Nate exchanged glances. Nate spoke first, “Well let’s stick to our original name shall we?” He looked over to William who smirked back and then to Mimi who avoided eye contact. “We are the Mutiny.”
Well that's chapter 10 guys. Thanks for the support. I was actually gonna give up this writing but u guys made me realise that i shouldn't Thank i love u all a bunch xoxoxo zuzu !
“Yes Nate?”
“About that day… When I left you… I’m really…”
“Nate don’t apologise. Please it’s over. Its been over for too long. Since you ever had a relationship with that… that Astaroche girl.”
“But we ended that relationship.”
“She dumped you Nate. But before that you dumped me for that girl. Now she dumps you, you think you can come running back to me Nate? Just because I act absolutely normal in front of everyone Nate It doesn’t mean that I’m not still mad at you. I still hate you. For leaving me in the woods that night. Stranded. Alone…”
~Flashback starts~
“Nate, Why have you brought me out here?” Mimi asked with a slight giggle.
“Because I needed to talk with you . Somewhere alone where we won’t get disturbed.”
Mimi and Nate both sat down under a tree. “What was it Nate, that you wanted to say?”
“Mimi I can’t be with you anymore,” Nate said coldly
Mimi just stared unable to form any words.
“It’s because there is someone else…”
“Astroche?”
Nate nodded and stood up. “Wait where are you going?” Mimi asked.
Nate kept walking, “I told you it was over right?”
“But I don’t know the way out. Your not just gonna leave me here?!” Mimi’s hair lost its colour. It went completely white.
“Good Bye Mimi.”
~End Flashback~
“Minona I’m so sorry. If there was one thing I could go back and fix it would be…”
“Too late.” Mimi said and started to walk away.
Nate grabbed her wrists and pushed her up against a tree, “You can’t do this to me!”
Mimi freed herself from his grasp and slapped him across the face. “Don’t touch me,” She said and walked away. A tear drop slid down her face.
……………………………
Chase sat back down next to Lisa on the bed. “What did you want to talk to me about Lisa?”
‘As if you don’t already know..’ Chase told himself.
“That day, when we kissed and Valeria…”
“I am sorry about that. I think there is nothing more between Valeria and myself anymore.”
“You think?”
“I don’t know what Valeria thinks.”
“So Chase what I was trying to ask you was…”
Chase couldn’t resist it. He leaned into a kiss and this time Lisa kissed him back. They broke apart. “You were going to ask me what this meant?”
Lisa nodded.
“The truth is I don’t exactly know…” Chase held her closer to him. Her back relaxed back into his chest. She didn’t know what this meant either.
……………………………
“So what’s today’s itinerary?” William asked and then he noticed the huge grey cloud between Nate and Mimi. Mimi cleared her thoughts about last night. “Shellfish has given me the location of Princess Madeline’s two closest friends. Our job is too find them and convince them to join our team.”
“And what if they don’t want to join us?” Yuffie asked intrigued that this was her first official mission.
“Well then I always give people two choices. Do what I say the easy way or the hard way.” Mimi replied
“Geez! Who put you on the good side?” William asked.
Mimi ignored his comment, “Afterall why wouldn’t they join us. We’re doing this for the better good and stuff.”
“Hey Umm Mimi.. I have a question!” Yuffie said
“Shoot away,”
“If we’re a team what is going to be our name?”
Mimi and Nate exchanged glances. Nate spoke first, “Well let’s stick to our original name shall we?” He looked over to William who smirked back and then to Mimi who avoided eye contact. “We are the Mutiny.”
Well that's chapter 10 guys. Thanks for the support. I was actually gonna give up this writing but u guys made me realise that i shouldn't Thank i love u all a bunch xoxoxo zuzu !
Pictures -WTNOTS
Profile:(will be updated as more info is released in stories)
Real Name: Chelsea Heartnet
Aliases: Minona, Mimi
Identity: Secret (Event to herself her memories were erased)
Occupation: Secret Agent
Education: Has 3 bachelor degrees, Is the most skilled person at martial arts as far as people know
Height: 5'8''
Weight: 130
Eyes: blue
Hair: Blonde (Changes colour when in different moods or when she wants to change)
Powers: Can convert cosmic energy into Plasma bolts (More to be revealed)
Weapons: To be or not to be revealed
Well Thats Mimi! I really like this one! I did her because it was my birthday this week and i think she owns all the drawings ive done so far! Anyway i will expand more on her character in upcoming chapters! love xoxo Zuzu
Friday, November 14, 2008
What's the name of this story? Chapter 9!
Chapter 9– New Characters introduced! Pange (fangrox)
“Shellfish?”
“Yes and I am here to invite you to join our team.”
“I don’t join no team so why don’t you get you team spirit and leave,”
“Chase… Rejection was it… hmm pity,” Shellfish smirked.
“H—How do you know?”
‘I know everything Valeria,’ The voice echoed in her head.
“You’re a talepath! But I thought that they …”
“Didn’t exist?”
“Didn’t Chase wipe them out?”
“Tsk.. Is Chase the only thing on your mind?”
“No…”
“My point is we would like you to come and join our team. I think you will be a fine addition with your impressive warrior skills.”
“For what cause?”
“A good one…”
“No can’t do. I ain’t no goody two shoes,”
“How does revenge sound to you,”
“Revenge,”
“From a certain someone…” Shellfish started circling Valeria, “Well let’s see…You trusted this certain ‘someone’…And they turned around and stabbed you in the back.” Valeria looked away.
“Maybe I’m not being describing enough..Black hair… Brown eyes?”
“I GET IT!”
“Good. So you’re decision is..?”
“I need time to think over it.”
“You have all the time in the world. Think about but don’t think too much. Joining the team… It will be the one thing you won’t regret unlike…” Shellfish faded away into thin air.
‘Unlike something you regret right now…’ The voice echoed in Valeria’s head.
…………………………
Jack walked into Angela’s chamber. “Come in Jack. I have been waiting. What took you so long?”
Jack walked in and knelt down, “Nothing your highness. A prisoner held me up…”
“That is ok and please don’t refer to me as your highness. Come on Jack we’ve known each other for too long for you to refer to me by that name. Highness, majesty it’s for all those lowlifes. You Jack…you’re different to me. You’ve stood by my side as a loyal..” Jack looked away but Angela continued, “As a loyal and supportive friend…That is why I have decided to promote you Jack. From this moment on you are the Captain of Pufflanta.”
“It is an honour…”
“Ah.. but it doesn’t end there. I have appointed a special assistant for you as I think I might be asking too much.” She looked towards the door. “Come in,” She ordered.
A lady figure walked in. “Jack meet Pange. She will be your assistant from now on and will help you on any tasks.”
“It is great meeting you,” Pange said with a fake-like smile.
“Pleasure meeting you too.”
“Jack you may be excused now…Oh wait I almost forgot! Despite you being promoted I still want you to take care of the Madeline situation. I could not leave it to anyone else as it is you I trust most. Now you can be excused.”
Jack looked down. “Of course,” he said and walked out of the room.
“Pange..”
“Yes your majesty?”
“I want you to keep an eye on him…”
…………………………
Mimi, Nate, William and Yuffie sat in a circle. “So what are we meant to do now? You know what does Shellfish want with us?”
Everyone turned to look at Mimi. “Well first of all we have to find the real Princess Madeline and you know restore her throne and crap…And then we do what Shell fish tells us to do… and yeah”
“Well you’ve planned this out sister haven’t you?”
“Can you do a better job with Shellfish’s orders brother?”
“Hey cut it out!” Nate interrupted.
“I’m sleepy I’m gonna go sleep. Plus we got a long day ahead of us tomorrow.”
They all got up and William and Yuffie left for their tents. Mimi blew out the seafire and headed for her tent. “Minona wait I need to talk to you…” Nate said.
Chapter 9 guys! Hope you loved it! So many love triangle and squares i swear! but its gonna get interesting! Also i am adding a profile with the pictures one by one so ive got one for captain fish gonna do one for the rest so enjoy guys! Hope ur lovin the updates as much as i love u guys! s2
“Shellfish?”
“Yes and I am here to invite you to join our team.”
“I don’t join no team so why don’t you get you team spirit and leave,”
“Chase… Rejection was it… hmm pity,” Shellfish smirked.
“H—How do you know?”
‘I know everything Valeria,’ The voice echoed in her head.
“You’re a talepath! But I thought that they …”
“Didn’t exist?”
“Didn’t Chase wipe them out?”
“Tsk.. Is Chase the only thing on your mind?”
“No…”
“My point is we would like you to come and join our team. I think you will be a fine addition with your impressive warrior skills.”
“For what cause?”
“A good one…”
“No can’t do. I ain’t no goody two shoes,”
“How does revenge sound to you,”
“Revenge,”
“From a certain someone…” Shellfish started circling Valeria, “Well let’s see…You trusted this certain ‘someone’…And they turned around and stabbed you in the back.” Valeria looked away.
“Maybe I’m not being describing enough..Black hair… Brown eyes?”
“I GET IT!”
“Good. So you’re decision is..?”
“I need time to think over it.”
“You have all the time in the world. Think about but don’t think too much. Joining the team… It will be the one thing you won’t regret unlike…” Shellfish faded away into thin air.
‘Unlike something you regret right now…’ The voice echoed in Valeria’s head.
…………………………
Jack walked into Angela’s chamber. “Come in Jack. I have been waiting. What took you so long?”
Jack walked in and knelt down, “Nothing your highness. A prisoner held me up…”
“That is ok and please don’t refer to me as your highness. Come on Jack we’ve known each other for too long for you to refer to me by that name. Highness, majesty it’s for all those lowlifes. You Jack…you’re different to me. You’ve stood by my side as a loyal..” Jack looked away but Angela continued, “As a loyal and supportive friend…That is why I have decided to promote you Jack. From this moment on you are the Captain of Pufflanta.”
“It is an honour…”
“Ah.. but it doesn’t end there. I have appointed a special assistant for you as I think I might be asking too much.” She looked towards the door. “Come in,” She ordered.
A lady figure walked in. “Jack meet Pange. She will be your assistant from now on and will help you on any tasks.”
“It is great meeting you,” Pange said with a fake-like smile.
“Pleasure meeting you too.”
“Jack you may be excused now…Oh wait I almost forgot! Despite you being promoted I still want you to take care of the Madeline situation. I could not leave it to anyone else as it is you I trust most. Now you can be excused.”
Jack looked down. “Of course,” he said and walked out of the room.
“Pange..”
“Yes your majesty?”
“I want you to keep an eye on him…”
…………………………
Mimi, Nate, William and Yuffie sat in a circle. “So what are we meant to do now? You know what does Shellfish want with us?”
Everyone turned to look at Mimi. “Well first of all we have to find the real Princess Madeline and you know restore her throne and crap…And then we do what Shell fish tells us to do… and yeah”
“Well you’ve planned this out sister haven’t you?”
“Can you do a better job with Shellfish’s orders brother?”
“Hey cut it out!” Nate interrupted.
“I’m sleepy I’m gonna go sleep. Plus we got a long day ahead of us tomorrow.”
They all got up and William and Yuffie left for their tents. Mimi blew out the seafire and headed for her tent. “Minona wait I need to talk to you…” Nate said.
Chapter 9 guys! Hope you loved it! So many love triangle and squares i swear! but its gonna get interesting! Also i am adding a profile with the pictures one by one so ive got one for captain fish gonna do one for the rest so enjoy guys! Hope ur lovin the updates as much as i love u guys! s2
Thursday, November 13, 2008
What's the name of this story- Chapter 8
Chapter 8
Madeline sat in her dark room. This was not what a princess was meant to do for her nation. A true princess was meant to stand up and fight for her nation, not be trapped in a tiny cave under her bed. She had to get out of here. But how?
‘Jack…’
No. Not Jack. Even if he is good I will never trust him. No never. He is just another slave of the wicked Angela. He cannot be trusted.
‘Use him…’
NO! I cannot use him, I cannot use him to my advantage.
‘It’s your only way out. Come on Madeline, what’s a pretty girl like you got to do? Just blink those pretty eyelashes of yours at him and he’ll be all over you’
Madeline sighed. No a princess could not be player. But to save her life and those of her nation? And what about Captain Fish?
………………………………
“Hand over your money now or bye bye to your beautiful baby girl,” Valeria said holding a little baby in her arms and a man pleading on his knees.
“Take this its all I have,” The man handed over some cash and Valeria was gone in a blink of an eye. She sat on a rooftop counting the amount of money she had just earned. ‘Damn bastard only had $120. Oh well it’ll get something nice to eat’
She lied down on the roof staring at the light shining from the world above. Through the much water in the ocean she could half make out the moon. Pityful white object hanging in the sky. ‘You’re pretty pitiful too you know…’
Shut up stupid brain. That changed her train of thought again, back to what had happened the other day with Chase. That damn c***. She hated him so much she would kill him the moment she saw him.
‘No you wouldn’t…”
Of course I would!
‘Well you WERE given the chance’
Grr.. Wow she really was going mental. She was arguing with her own bloody conscience. She jumped off the roof and went to fetch herself some food. As she came out of the café, stuffing her face with the jam donut, she bumped into an unknown figure. “Hello I am Shelly fishman..other wise known as Shellfish...its nice to finally meet you Valeria.”
………………………………
Chase was back to his normal self again and he didn’t like it one bit. Now he was worrying about Lisa. The poor girl which if he hadn’t set guards to look after her would probably have killed herself by now.
Chase walked over to Lisa’s room. The guards bowed and stepped aside and let Chase enter the room. There lay Lisa on the floor, passed out. “Oh no!” He ran to her and held her in his harm. “Lisa wake up! Lisa. Lisa!!! Can you hear me Lisa?! Say something!” Lisa made a soft noise and Chase hugged her tighter. ‘WTF ARE YOU DOING,’ Chase asked himself. Lisa woke up and stared at the concerned face looking at her. After regaining her full conscience she gasped and sat up. “Chase?!”
“I—I just came to check up on you..and uh .. you were on the floor…” ‘Stop stumbling on your words!’ “And I thought something might be wrong so I just picked you up and was about to take you to a doctor…”
“No I’m fine just felt dizzy.”
“Ok, then I will leave you to rest now. I will ask one of the servants to send you something to eat.” Chase got up and walked towards the door.
“Chase! Wait!”
………………………………...
Jack entered the cave. “Angela sent me to check on you,” he said in a calm, emotionless voice.
“I am sorry.” Madeline said.
“Huh?”
“About yesterday, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to call you a-–-a….”
“Monster?”
“Yes I’m sorry.”
“It’s ok. I get that from a lot of people around here.” A gentle smile lit his face.
“I want to leave. I want to leave this place with you.” She stopped and thought about this one more time, “I want to leave and be with you..”
You could see the excitement and happiness in Jack’s face. He held her close and closed his eyes. His hands tangled in her hair. “Don’t worry. I promise I’ll get you out of here.”
Tears started to form in Madeline’s eyes but she blinked them away.
Well chapter 8 for you! Enjoy! And thanks for all the comments! LOVE YOUALL!
Madeline sat in her dark room. This was not what a princess was meant to do for her nation. A true princess was meant to stand up and fight for her nation, not be trapped in a tiny cave under her bed. She had to get out of here. But how?
‘Jack…’
No. Not Jack. Even if he is good I will never trust him. No never. He is just another slave of the wicked Angela. He cannot be trusted.
‘Use him…’
NO! I cannot use him, I cannot use him to my advantage.
‘It’s your only way out. Come on Madeline, what’s a pretty girl like you got to do? Just blink those pretty eyelashes of yours at him and he’ll be all over you’
Madeline sighed. No a princess could not be player. But to save her life and those of her nation? And what about Captain Fish?
………………………………
“Hand over your money now or bye bye to your beautiful baby girl,” Valeria said holding a little baby in her arms and a man pleading on his knees.
“Take this its all I have,” The man handed over some cash and Valeria was gone in a blink of an eye. She sat on a rooftop counting the amount of money she had just earned. ‘Damn bastard only had $120. Oh well it’ll get something nice to eat’
She lied down on the roof staring at the light shining from the world above. Through the much water in the ocean she could half make out the moon. Pityful white object hanging in the sky. ‘You’re pretty pitiful too you know…’
Shut up stupid brain. That changed her train of thought again, back to what had happened the other day with Chase. That damn c***. She hated him so much she would kill him the moment she saw him.
‘No you wouldn’t…”
Of course I would!
‘Well you WERE given the chance’
Grr.. Wow she really was going mental. She was arguing with her own bloody conscience. She jumped off the roof and went to fetch herself some food. As she came out of the café, stuffing her face with the jam donut, she bumped into an unknown figure. “Hello I am Shelly fishman..other wise known as Shellfish...its nice to finally meet you Valeria.”
………………………………
Chase was back to his normal self again and he didn’t like it one bit. Now he was worrying about Lisa. The poor girl which if he hadn’t set guards to look after her would probably have killed herself by now.
Chase walked over to Lisa’s room. The guards bowed and stepped aside and let Chase enter the room. There lay Lisa on the floor, passed out. “Oh no!” He ran to her and held her in his harm. “Lisa wake up! Lisa. Lisa!!! Can you hear me Lisa?! Say something!” Lisa made a soft noise and Chase hugged her tighter. ‘WTF ARE YOU DOING,’ Chase asked himself. Lisa woke up and stared at the concerned face looking at her. After regaining her full conscience she gasped and sat up. “Chase?!”
“I—I just came to check up on you..and uh .. you were on the floor…” ‘Stop stumbling on your words!’ “And I thought something might be wrong so I just picked you up and was about to take you to a doctor…”
“No I’m fine just felt dizzy.”
“Ok, then I will leave you to rest now. I will ask one of the servants to send you something to eat.” Chase got up and walked towards the door.
“Chase! Wait!”
………………………………...
Jack entered the cave. “Angela sent me to check on you,” he said in a calm, emotionless voice.
“I am sorry.” Madeline said.
“Huh?”
“About yesterday, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to call you a-–-a….”
“Monster?”
“Yes I’m sorry.”
“It’s ok. I get that from a lot of people around here.” A gentle smile lit his face.
“I want to leave. I want to leave this place with you.” She stopped and thought about this one more time, “I want to leave and be with you..”
You could see the excitement and happiness in Jack’s face. He held her close and closed his eyes. His hands tangled in her hair. “Don’t worry. I promise I’ll get you out of here.”
Tears started to form in Madeline’s eyes but she blinked them away.
Well chapter 8 for you! Enjoy! And thanks for all the comments! LOVE YOUALL!
Wednesday, November 12, 2008
Announcement!
Hey guys sorry no updates today! It's my birthdays so im taking a break! I came to say hi though! Hope your loving the story btw and please leave a comment.. Though sometimes the comment thingy doesnt work so keep refreshing it until it does :P
Anyway tomorrow is a drawing of Mimi..(cuz i didnt do it today for my b'day) followed by chapter 8! Enjoy!
Anyway tomorrow is a drawing of Mimi..(cuz i didnt do it today for my b'day) followed by chapter 8! Enjoy!
Tuesday, November 11, 2008
What's the name of this story- Chaper 7 (extra long)
Chapter 7
“Yuffie?”
“Yes Yuffie. She’s my girlfriend…”
“No time for all the squealing and congratulating, where the hell is she?”
William told Mimi where Yuffie’s prison was. Nate carried William out of the castle as he was hardly able to walk. Mimi found the prison and smashed the enterance. Totally terrified Yuffie looked up, alarmed.
“Hmm… You look like the decription I was given. I am Minona or Mimi for short and I am Williams sister.” Mimi brought out her hand but Yuffie hesitated to shake it. “Don’t worry William is fine. He sent me to bust you outta here.” Yuffie finally shook her hand. Not breaking the handshake Mimi pulled her out of the prison. “Come on, let’s get outta here!”
……………………………..
Eminence sat in her room quietly thinking. Captain Fish entered the room in a rush. “Eminence we can’t be resting we have to look for Madeline!”
“I know, I know…But we don’t have any leads, any witnesses..”
“I DON’T GIVE A BLOODY DAMN ABOUT LEADS AND WITNESSES! ALL I KNOW AND CARE ABOUT IS THAT MY MADELINE IS OUT THERE ON HER OWN AND I NEED TO FIND HER!”
Tears flowed out of Eminence’s eyes. He brought her in to a comforting cuddle. “No, I didn’t want to scream at you. You know how worried I am about Madeline right. You know how much I love her right. Please don’t cry I’m sorry.” Eminence nodded into the hug. They broke apart and Captain Fish lead her out of the room with a gentle smile.
……………………………….
Jack walked into Madeline’s room and slipped under her bed. There he was taken down into a cave through an escalator. He confirmed his identity and walked into the little tunnel carrying Madeline’s food. Madeline sat in a corner, her skin pale and her eyes dull from her hunger and sorrow. Jack walked in and put the food down and sat in front of her. She did not look up. “Please eat. You’re very pale you need your energy.” She didn’t say a word. “Look, I’m gonna help break you outta here. Please try and trust me. I am sorry I captured you here and now I want to break you out!” Madeline turned around facing the wall. Jack walked around and sat right in front of her. He cupped the side of her face and spoke in a soft voice, “Please eat you need your energy. Trust me I am only going to help you.” Madeline pushed his hand away.
“Don’t touch me you monster!”
Jack got up and walked away. “Eat,” he said and disappeared as the doors of the escalater closed.
………………………………….
Angela looked at Chase with a vicious smile. “So what do I set the timer to?” he asked.
“Well none of my opponents take that long, so I suppose 10 minutes would be fine?”
He chuckled and set the timer 10 minutes. The timer made a Bing noise and Angela sent her first blow right for Chase’s stomach. He swiftly dodged it capturing her arm in one fist and bringing the other fist to her face. She kicked them apart and they stood there for a few seconds capturing their breath. Angela was first again to run in and attack but this time as she launched her kick she shape-shifted into a Ninja. Chase received a full ninja kick in the face and was thrown 3 metres away. Angela transformed back.
Chase grinned, “You’re a worth opponent after all.” He stood up and smirked evil widely as not one, not two but five of him appeared in a line. “So you do have a special gift King Chase?” Angela took her position, “You can multiply…”
Angela dived into an attack but this time Chase came in faster launching an attack to Angela’s stomach and capturing her wrist and punching her in the stomach again. Angela kicked with her knee to the no-man’s zone and Chase fell to the ground and faded away. “Well done Angela but next time try to get the real me?” All of the Chase’s said at once.
Angela growled and dived to attack another Chase. By the time the clock had reached 9 minutes Angela had eliminated two more Chase’s. She had to pick between the two Chases and she had to pick the right one. She decided the one on the left and charged at him but he just stood there making no movement whatsoever. She diverted her attack to the other Chase trying to take them both on at the same time. The timer rung. The match was over.
“Well that was quite entertaining. Pity you weren’t able to defeat me so I take that as my part of the deal is the one standing?”
“Yes pity of course. But you didn’t take me down either,” She said with a smirk.
“For now, there will be no further attacks on Pufflanta. But I would like a rematch sometime soon,” Chase announced.
“Yes of course. Meanwhile I will return to my throne as Queen and order my servants to make me a delicious meal. I will look forward to meeting you soon,” She said with a smirk.
“Queen?” Chase asked with a flirtatious smile.
“A simple mistake of the tongue. Of course I will soon become the queen of Pufflanta aswell but meanwhile princess is most pleasing.”
Chase inched closer and whispered in her ear, “Well I don’t think it will be too long before you become Queen. I certainly hope not. And I will look forward to meeting you too..very soon”
………………………………
“Yes shellfish I have William here with me right now. He has brought his friend err.. girlfriend with him too…. Yes I will tell him your best wishes…. I look forward to meeting you soon….Take care. Mimi broke her telepathic connection with Shellfish and turned to the rest.
“It’s just like it use to be 3 years ago yeah?” Nate said popping down beside Mimi.
“Not exactly but kind of,” Mimi replied a bit lost in thought. She recollected herself, “Anyway we are going to start recruiting from tomorrow,”
“Recruiting?”
“Yes according to Shellfish we’re a group again and we have a mission too…”
“So who are the new recruits?”
“Two very close friends of Princess Madeline… The real one…”
Hey there guys! I hope you enjoyed it! I made this extra long since tomorrow is my birthday and i won't be writing anything! It's getting interesting is it not? Anyway take care! love u all and keep reading!
“Yuffie?”
“Yes Yuffie. She’s my girlfriend…”
“No time for all the squealing and congratulating, where the hell is she?”
William told Mimi where Yuffie’s prison was. Nate carried William out of the castle as he was hardly able to walk. Mimi found the prison and smashed the enterance. Totally terrified Yuffie looked up, alarmed.
“Hmm… You look like the decription I was given. I am Minona or Mimi for short and I am Williams sister.” Mimi brought out her hand but Yuffie hesitated to shake it. “Don’t worry William is fine. He sent me to bust you outta here.” Yuffie finally shook her hand. Not breaking the handshake Mimi pulled her out of the prison. “Come on, let’s get outta here!”
……………………………..
Eminence sat in her room quietly thinking. Captain Fish entered the room in a rush. “Eminence we can’t be resting we have to look for Madeline!”
“I know, I know…But we don’t have any leads, any witnesses..”
“I DON’T GIVE A BLOODY DAMN ABOUT LEADS AND WITNESSES! ALL I KNOW AND CARE ABOUT IS THAT MY MADELINE IS OUT THERE ON HER OWN AND I NEED TO FIND HER!”
Tears flowed out of Eminence’s eyes. He brought her in to a comforting cuddle. “No, I didn’t want to scream at you. You know how worried I am about Madeline right. You know how much I love her right. Please don’t cry I’m sorry.” Eminence nodded into the hug. They broke apart and Captain Fish lead her out of the room with a gentle smile.
……………………………….
Jack walked into Madeline’s room and slipped under her bed. There he was taken down into a cave through an escalator. He confirmed his identity and walked into the little tunnel carrying Madeline’s food. Madeline sat in a corner, her skin pale and her eyes dull from her hunger and sorrow. Jack walked in and put the food down and sat in front of her. She did not look up. “Please eat. You’re very pale you need your energy.” She didn’t say a word. “Look, I’m gonna help break you outta here. Please try and trust me. I am sorry I captured you here and now I want to break you out!” Madeline turned around facing the wall. Jack walked around and sat right in front of her. He cupped the side of her face and spoke in a soft voice, “Please eat you need your energy. Trust me I am only going to help you.” Madeline pushed his hand away.
“Don’t touch me you monster!”
Jack got up and walked away. “Eat,” he said and disappeared as the doors of the escalater closed.
………………………………….
Angela looked at Chase with a vicious smile. “So what do I set the timer to?” he asked.
“Well none of my opponents take that long, so I suppose 10 minutes would be fine?”
He chuckled and set the timer 10 minutes. The timer made a Bing noise and Angela sent her first blow right for Chase’s stomach. He swiftly dodged it capturing her arm in one fist and bringing the other fist to her face. She kicked them apart and they stood there for a few seconds capturing their breath. Angela was first again to run in and attack but this time as she launched her kick she shape-shifted into a Ninja. Chase received a full ninja kick in the face and was thrown 3 metres away. Angela transformed back.
Chase grinned, “You’re a worth opponent after all.” He stood up and smirked evil widely as not one, not two but five of him appeared in a line. “So you do have a special gift King Chase?” Angela took her position, “You can multiply…”
Angela dived into an attack but this time Chase came in faster launching an attack to Angela’s stomach and capturing her wrist and punching her in the stomach again. Angela kicked with her knee to the no-man’s zone and Chase fell to the ground and faded away. “Well done Angela but next time try to get the real me?” All of the Chase’s said at once.
Angela growled and dived to attack another Chase. By the time the clock had reached 9 minutes Angela had eliminated two more Chase’s. She had to pick between the two Chases and she had to pick the right one. She decided the one on the left and charged at him but he just stood there making no movement whatsoever. She diverted her attack to the other Chase trying to take them both on at the same time. The timer rung. The match was over.
“Well that was quite entertaining. Pity you weren’t able to defeat me so I take that as my part of the deal is the one standing?”
“Yes pity of course. But you didn’t take me down either,” She said with a smirk.
“For now, there will be no further attacks on Pufflanta. But I would like a rematch sometime soon,” Chase announced.
“Yes of course. Meanwhile I will return to my throne as Queen and order my servants to make me a delicious meal. I will look forward to meeting you soon,” She said with a smirk.
“Queen?” Chase asked with a flirtatious smile.
“A simple mistake of the tongue. Of course I will soon become the queen of Pufflanta aswell but meanwhile princess is most pleasing.”
Chase inched closer and whispered in her ear, “Well I don’t think it will be too long before you become Queen. I certainly hope not. And I will look forward to meeting you too..very soon”
………………………………
“Yes shellfish I have William here with me right now. He has brought his friend err.. girlfriend with him too…. Yes I will tell him your best wishes…. I look forward to meeting you soon….Take care. Mimi broke her telepathic connection with Shellfish and turned to the rest.
“It’s just like it use to be 3 years ago yeah?” Nate said popping down beside Mimi.
“Not exactly but kind of,” Mimi replied a bit lost in thought. She recollected herself, “Anyway we are going to start recruiting from tomorrow,”
“Recruiting?”
“Yes according to Shellfish we’re a group again and we have a mission too…”
“So who are the new recruits?”
“Two very close friends of Princess Madeline… The real one…”
Hey there guys! I hope you enjoyed it! I made this extra long since tomorrow is my birthday and i won't be writing anything! It's getting interesting is it not? Anyway take care! love u all and keep reading!
Pictures - WTNOTS
Profile:(will be updated as more info is released in stories)
Real Name: James Fishhook
Aliases: Captain Fish
Identity: Secret (known to few living)
Occupation: Captain of the Pufflantian Army forces, ex-bartender, spy
Education: Privately tutored
Height: 6'0''
Weight: 180 lbs
Eyes: brown
Hair: Blonde (Black when in dark mode)
Powers: To be or not to be revealed
Weapons: To be or not to be revealed
I like this one but the damn scanner didn't put it up right.. Any way i present to you Captain Fish! I hope you like it apa... btw more info on captain fish will be coming in future chapters
Monday, November 10, 2008
What's the name of this story?
Chapter 6
The door to Williams prison burst open. William looked up, barely able to move his head from all the torture the guards had done to him. William was surprised to see his sister Mimi standing at the doorway her leg halfway in the air from busting the door open. She saw her brother, he was battered, she couldn’t stand it. She ran to him and blew up the locks on his hands and hugged him. “We have to get out of here!”
“Mimi? Wha…What are you doing here?”
“Rescuing you ofcourse! No hurry Nate is standing watch outside!”
“No!”
“What!?!?!”
“I’m not leaving without Yuffie!!”
“Yuffie?”
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Angela smashed open the doors of the castle. She walked in maintaining her tall and proud posture. The guards made way and she walked up to King Chase’s throne and stood there, without bowing. King Chase started to hear murmering among the guards and ordered them to leave. Chase got off his throne and walked down. They stood there staring at each other for a moment, analyzing the enemy. Then Chase smiled.
“Your not Princess Madeline,” he said
Angela was shocked but showed no emotion on her face whatsoever. “I see that you know already so I will not waste anymore of my precious time. Tell me why did u send attack forces to Pufflanta?”
“Hmm..?”
“Yes the forces. About 500 men, right? I’m sure it will please you to know that they were all burnt down to the ground. Of course we do have some hostages…You see I’m here to make you a deal.”
“Pity. I’m not easily convinced into making deals.”
“I have a proposition of peace. I can return your remaining army, without causing them further harm, safely to Toothpick in order that you promise no further attacks on Pufflanta.”
“Well Princess I have a deal for you. You can leave your throne and I will easily combine the two nations into one. I will lead them both and no harm whatsoever will come over your people.”
“Hmm.. What’s the point of protecting the people? As far as my concerns are the people are there to serve me, their Princess. If I leave the throne what is their purpose of living. But to decide between which of these deals are going to be taken up I challenge you to a royal duel.”
“Ahh a royal duel. Usually, as I know you are not the real princess I would not accept this duel. But you do look like a worthy opponent and I never refuse a good fight.” He grinned, “I think I might take you up on this offer…” He through he cape off and it flew to the ground.
Angela’s smirk grew wider, “ I think this might not be a complete waste,” She took of her Crown, “Make this worth my time…”
Yup that was chapter 6. I am also gonna put chapter 7 up withing half an hour or so! Hope you enjoyed it!
The door to Williams prison burst open. William looked up, barely able to move his head from all the torture the guards had done to him. William was surprised to see his sister Mimi standing at the doorway her leg halfway in the air from busting the door open. She saw her brother, he was battered, she couldn’t stand it. She ran to him and blew up the locks on his hands and hugged him. “We have to get out of here!”
“Mimi? Wha…What are you doing here?”
“Rescuing you ofcourse! No hurry Nate is standing watch outside!”
“No!”
“What!?!?!”
“I’m not leaving without Yuffie!!”
“Yuffie?”
………………………………
Angela smashed open the doors of the castle. She walked in maintaining her tall and proud posture. The guards made way and she walked up to King Chase’s throne and stood there, without bowing. King Chase started to hear murmering among the guards and ordered them to leave. Chase got off his throne and walked down. They stood there staring at each other for a moment, analyzing the enemy. Then Chase smiled.
“Your not Princess Madeline,” he said
Angela was shocked but showed no emotion on her face whatsoever. “I see that you know already so I will not waste anymore of my precious time. Tell me why did u send attack forces to Pufflanta?”
“Hmm..?”
“Yes the forces. About 500 men, right? I’m sure it will please you to know that they were all burnt down to the ground. Of course we do have some hostages…You see I’m here to make you a deal.”
“Pity. I’m not easily convinced into making deals.”
“I have a proposition of peace. I can return your remaining army, without causing them further harm, safely to Toothpick in order that you promise no further attacks on Pufflanta.”
“Well Princess I have a deal for you. You can leave your throne and I will easily combine the two nations into one. I will lead them both and no harm whatsoever will come over your people.”
“Hmm.. What’s the point of protecting the people? As far as my concerns are the people are there to serve me, their Princess. If I leave the throne what is their purpose of living. But to decide between which of these deals are going to be taken up I challenge you to a royal duel.”
“Ahh a royal duel. Usually, as I know you are not the real princess I would not accept this duel. But you do look like a worthy opponent and I never refuse a good fight.” He grinned, “I think I might take you up on this offer…” He through he cape off and it flew to the ground.
Angela’s smirk grew wider, “ I think this might not be a complete waste,” She took of her Crown, “Make this worth my time…”
Yup that was chapter 6. I am also gonna put chapter 7 up withing half an hour or so! Hope you enjoyed it!
Pictures- WTNOTS
Profile:(will be updated as more info is released in stories)
Real Name: Yuffie Pride
Aliases: None
Identity: Known (but as a boy)
Occupation: Prince/ss of Toothpick
Education: Graduate of Toothpick University
Height: 5'5''
Weight: 15 lbs
Eyes: White (no pupils)
Hair: Black with blonde streaks
Powers: To be or not to be revealed
Weapons: To be or not to be revealed
hmm i dunno abt this one! i really wanted the hair to be blonde! it looked so cute! but since darla wanted it black i did both! i just followed darla's description basically! this is my first cutish drawing for this story so i dont think it will be my best yet :P
Sunday, November 9, 2008
What's the name of this story? Chapter 5
Chapter 5
Chase had thought about what had happened between him and Lisa. ‘She had just broken up with his sister…or brother whatever, and then the next thing she knows she is being kissed by her ex’s brother? What must be going through her head? And what did the kiss mean? Love, comfort or support?’ He had strolled around constantly thinking about it. ‘And then there was Valeria… What would she have thought?’ He vaguely remembered the time he had kissed her. ‘Was that love? Or was it just because I was drunk? And wait a second why the hell am I even thinking about this crap. I am a overpowering evil King who rules over a whole kingdom and I’m worried about a bunch of girls? Girls come and go…’
*No they don’t*
‘Shut up good conscience!’
He tossed between approaching an overly devastated and depressed loser or a mad woman who he had enraged so much she would kill him with one blow of her sword. He chose the mad, enraged woman and now was standing with sword held to his neck. ‘Great,’ he thought.
………………………
Lisa sat in her room in silence. So many thoughts were going through her head. Yuffie whom she had developed a weird disliking for, Chase who she was utterly confused about and then there was Valeria. Valeria looked like she would kill her the other day. ‘Do I like Chase? Does Chase like me? What was the kiss about? Could it have meant nothing? Didn’t he know what his actions would do to me?’ Her head was spinning and so was her room. She collapsed.
………………………
Chase looked at Valeria, horrified. He could practically see the flames burning in her eyes. That horrified look soon turned into a grin as his natural instincts took over. “Oh no Ria! Are you mad at me? I am truly sorry. I really am,” He said with a huge smirk.
Valeria tightened her grip on her sword and Chase felt the sword inch closer to his neck. “What do you want now you son of a b****?”
“I am just here to apologize to my girlfriend. I was truly messed up back in Lisa’s room I really did not know what to do…” Chase said trying to look innocent.
“Girlfriend? Tough Chance! So to comfort that gloomy bitch you decided to kiss her?” She lowered her sword, “Just get lost.”
Chase smiled, “You’re pathetic Valeria, you know you are…” Chase stroked her chin. Valeria pushed his hand away with force. He grinned and walked away.
………………………
“Princess Madeline! We are being attacked by forces of Toothpick! They’re forces aren’t that strong a few hundred men. We can easily take them down. What is your order your highness?” the soldier asked
Angela stroked her chin. “The forces that are attacking, burn them down. Don’t let a single person live and the few lucky ones throw them into the dungeons,”
“Yes Princess,”
Angela smirked, “Also arrange my carriage for a visit to toothpick. It is time I meet this so called Chase”
Well that was chapter 5! Hope you loved it as much as i loved writing it! Thanks for all the support and as you might be noticing im starting to build a plot here. Promised appearances of Mimi, Nate, Captain Fish and Eminence in the next chapter! Till then i love you all S2
Chase had thought about what had happened between him and Lisa. ‘She had just broken up with his sister…or brother whatever, and then the next thing she knows she is being kissed by her ex’s brother? What must be going through her head? And what did the kiss mean? Love, comfort or support?’ He had strolled around constantly thinking about it. ‘And then there was Valeria… What would she have thought?’ He vaguely remembered the time he had kissed her. ‘Was that love? Or was it just because I was drunk? And wait a second why the hell am I even thinking about this crap. I am a overpowering evil King who rules over a whole kingdom and I’m worried about a bunch of girls? Girls come and go…’
*No they don’t*
‘Shut up good conscience!’
He tossed between approaching an overly devastated and depressed loser or a mad woman who he had enraged so much she would kill him with one blow of her sword. He chose the mad, enraged woman and now was standing with sword held to his neck. ‘Great,’ he thought.
………………………
Lisa sat in her room in silence. So many thoughts were going through her head. Yuffie whom she had developed a weird disliking for, Chase who she was utterly confused about and then there was Valeria. Valeria looked like she would kill her the other day. ‘Do I like Chase? Does Chase like me? What was the kiss about? Could it have meant nothing? Didn’t he know what his actions would do to me?’ Her head was spinning and so was her room. She collapsed.
………………………
Chase looked at Valeria, horrified. He could practically see the flames burning in her eyes. That horrified look soon turned into a grin as his natural instincts took over. “Oh no Ria! Are you mad at me? I am truly sorry. I really am,” He said with a huge smirk.
Valeria tightened her grip on her sword and Chase felt the sword inch closer to his neck. “What do you want now you son of a b****?”
“I am just here to apologize to my girlfriend. I was truly messed up back in Lisa’s room I really did not know what to do…” Chase said trying to look innocent.
“Girlfriend? Tough Chance! So to comfort that gloomy bitch you decided to kiss her?” She lowered her sword, “Just get lost.”
Chase smiled, “You’re pathetic Valeria, you know you are…” Chase stroked her chin. Valeria pushed his hand away with force. He grinned and walked away.
………………………
“Princess Madeline! We are being attacked by forces of Toothpick! They’re forces aren’t that strong a few hundred men. We can easily take them down. What is your order your highness?” the soldier asked
Angela stroked her chin. “The forces that are attacking, burn them down. Don’t let a single person live and the few lucky ones throw them into the dungeons,”
“Yes Princess,”
Angela smirked, “Also arrange my carriage for a visit to toothpick. It is time I meet this so called Chase”
Well that was chapter 5! Hope you loved it as much as i loved writing it! Thanks for all the support and as you might be noticing im starting to build a plot here. Promised appearances of Mimi, Nate, Captain Fish and Eminence in the next chapter! Till then i love you all S2
Saturday, November 8, 2008
Pictures- WTNOTS
Profile:(will be updated as more info is released in stories)
Real Name: Angela Anchor
Aliases: none (some might be revealed in future)
Identity: Known to all except right now she is pretending to be Madeline which is only known to some
Occupation: Pirate (mostly an astray)
Education: Dropped out 3rd grade
Height: 5'8''
Weight: 140
Eyes: Red
Hair: Black
Powers: Shapeshifts also is a Ninja master(More to be revealed or not to be revealed)
Weapons: To be or not to be revealed
I really liked this one! Angela FTW! Because now Guru is my picture editor! She fixes everything that goes bad on the scanner and the picture looks awesome! Thanks Guru! Anyway i hope u all like it too ! how cool is she huh?
Pictures- WTNOTS
Profile:(will be updated as more info is released in stories)
Real Name: Chase Pride
Aliases: None identified
Identity: Known
Occupation: King of Toothpick, Ex-General of Army of Toothpick
Education: Graduate from Toothpick University had a degree
Height: 5'11''
Weight: 160
Eyes: Black
Hair: Brown
Powers: Can multiply (More to be revealed or not to be revealed)
Weapons: To be or not to be revealed
LoL this is a rough sketch of Chase. i liked his clothes and all but i dunno ab the rest. The printer scanned it pretty bad too, it only picked up the dark lines. Hope you like it though!
What's the name of this story?
Before i begin my story i would like to dedicate it to everyone on Guru’s chat especially Guru and the mods who this story is about! (Well not really about THEM)
This character guide is for everyone from Chatango (Guru’s chat and anime rumor):
Angela(avatarguru), Mimi(zuzu/zutarafirebendaluv), Valeria(Ruberry_muffin/Ru), Jack(kaiser123), Eminence(pigiwigi) Madeline(aqua111) Yuffie(darla1207) Chase(arielcom) Captain Fish(iamapa) Lisa (issadanielle) Shellfish (Crazula)
Chapter 1
This story is set under the sea (lalalala!). Angela is the princess of PUFFLANTA where she is respected by all in her nation! The truth is that she is a Ninja Pirate in disguise from the above world! Madeline the real princess of Pufflanta was kidnapped and held hostage under her bed, a place where no one would bother look! Jack a faithful and hunky sidekick of Angela was the one holding Madeline hostage. He had grown to like her and care for her but Madeline had hated him and the rest of his gang.
Eminence and Captain Fish, best friends of Madeline, were out in search for her when suddenly Captain Fish yelled, “OMG I FOUND HER!”
“Where?!” Eminence asked.
“Oh wait no it’s a just seaweed,”
Meanwhile at the palace Angela appointed a new knight called Valeria (who also had a burning hate for people called Emma). Little did Angela know that Valeria was actually a spy from their opposing kingdom of Toothpick land. Chase the much loved yet evil King of Toothpick Land had ordered Valeria his noble ‘female’ night to go and seek out information which would help him takeover.
In this chaos Yuffie the brave prince of toothpick realized that ‘he’ was not a prince but a princess! As this shocked her deeply and emotionally she decided to leave toothpick and go to Pufflanta. Hearing this news Lisa, who was Yuffie’s girlfriend went in to a state of depression…luckily someone was there for her….
When Yuffie approached the border of Pufflanta she was attacked by Mimi who though she was a monkey. As Yuffie ran for her life she ran straight into the hands of Jack! Jack threw her into the dungeons. While all this was happening Mimi watched quietly planning out for her next move. Little did anyone know Mimi was a secret detective from an unknown destination.
What is going to be Angela’s next move? Oh no is that rejection between Jack and Madeline and Why does Mimi hate monkeys???? Find out that and much more in the next editions of ‘What’s the name of this story?’
New Characters coming up later: Nate(darkalex) Shellfish (crazula) William (Goldenmunky)
Chapter 2
Yuffie sat in her prison cell crying and alone. What was left in this world for her now? Yuffie had never really loved Lisa, it was more a of a forced affection. The truth was Yuffie always knew she was a girl but her parents always raised her as a boy. Lisa was also introduced to Yuffie by her parents. Chase, Yuffie’s older brother, wasn’t the most reliable person in the world. He was just too busy executing people and trying to take over the sea. Yuffie understood that that was a really hard and difficult job but wouldn’t mind a little attention from her brother. The door handle to her dungeon turned and Yuffie lifted her gaze. In front of her stood the most handsome man she had ever seen.
Angela’s POV:
Angela sat in her throne thinking about what she would do with this throne once she became the queen. Hmm…. The Queen.. It sounded good.. but to become a queen she would need to find a man, and just any man wouldn’t do. But she was enjoying herself with the current amount of power. She was lucky to be a shape-shifter, she could change herself to look like anyone. It was great! The door opened and a few guards walked in and kneeled before her. How she’d never get sick of that.
Angela’s POV end..
“Princess Madeline, as u ordered we have blown up the surrounding 4 cities. What is your wish right now?” one of the guards asked
“Have you gotten my apple pie as I have ordered?” Angela asked.
“Yes Of Course!” One of the guards walked up to her and handed her the apple pie. She glared at the pie and then took a small bite.
She through the pie at the guards face, “How dare you serve me a cold apple pie! Don’t you know better! For this you will go to the dungeons!” She looked at the other guard who looked like he was about to wet his pants. “You there! Go bomb down some poor defenseless city and then report to me.”
Valeria was happy. It was a rare thing. The only thing that would make her happy would be seeing someone going through an immense amount of suffering. She was happy that she was going back to toothpick. She was happy that she was going back to Chase… The only thing on her mind since the makeout session was Chase… (Personal Note from the writer: AHAHAHAHA WOOT! :P)
Lisa sat in a corner of her room. Sobbing and regretting her relationship with Yuffie. Chase was taking his occasional prowl around the castle grinning to himself about another town he had taken over. This one put on a fight and it was always much more fun when the opposition went down in a fight. He stopped when he heard her crying from Lisa’s room. He entered the room. She sat there in the corner of the room crying. He knew what this was about. He knelt down beside her and looked at her. She looked back at him with red eyes. The thoughts in his head were going so fast he didn’t know what was happening. He looked in her eyes once more and without another thought dove into kiss her. Lisa pushed him away. He thought it was rejection until he saw Valeria standing at the door…
Note from author: Hey guys this one was a bit serious but i wanted to have a love triangle and so it needed to be serious but LOL! I love you guys and i promise next one is gonna be awesomely awesome. And im promising appearances of Mimi, Jack, Eminence, Madeline and Captain Fish in the next one. I still need to build up each character and yeah… and i dont know how to do love scenes LOL! i hate lovey dovey books.. anyway enjoy love zuzu
Chapter 3
Eminence sat in her room. She had looked every possible place that Madeline could be. Only she and Captain Fish knew that Angela was not the real Madeline. She was worried where her friend was. Where could she possibly be? They had looked in her closet, in the shower (the lady in there wacked Captain Fish across the head), on the roof, in the oven but there was no sign of her. Captain Fish had claimed to have seen her many times but it had turned out to be seaweed or slime. As Eminence was deep in thought Captain Fish came running into her room. “I think I know where she is!”
Eminence stood up, “WHERE!”
“We haven’t looked under her bed?!” Eminence stood up and hit captain fish over the head with a hand bag. He really did deserve it, really how stupid could someone get?
Yuffie was stunned at how handsome the man standing in front of her was. If she hadn’t been crying earlier she would probably be drooling. ‘Wait a few days ago I was a guy dating a girl, now I’m practically drooling over this guy? But if I was dating a girl would that make me a lesbian? Or now that I like this guy would I be gay? Or wait am I a bi?!’ She was practically screaming in her head.
The man walked in with a tray of food and put it right next to her. He sat down just staring at the girl. He though she was beautiful. ‘She has a very weird hairstyle though…’ he thought. He snapped out of it. “Here is your food,” He said in the most emotionless voice he could put together, “I am meant to stay here and keep watch while you eat,”
“Okay,” She whispered and looked down at her food.
“What’s your name?” He asked.
“Yuffie…”
‘Yuffie? So cute’ he thought, ‘Weird but it suits her’.
“What’s your name?” Yuffie asked.
“I’m William.” They continued talking about weird things such as dead turtles and flying sea pigs. When Yuffie finished her meal he walked out staring at her as he went but he walked straight into a wall.
“Yes,” Mimi said and hung up the phone. She sat down and sighed. ‘Finally a break…’ She sat down and drifted off to sleep. A few minutes later she woke, finding herself tied to a tree. She heard sounds. They were not just any sounds, they were monkey. Hundreds of monkey swung down from the branches, surrounding her from each corner. She felt a bolt of plasma building up in her fists as she broke free of the rope and punched the first monkey she saw in the face.
She woke up. It was a dream. Only then she realized that she had punched someone in the face, and it was someone she knew…
Valeria was furious. She had been betrayed. Betrayed by the only person she truly loved. She punched the wall in front of her as hard as she could. Her hand bled but she didn’t care. It hurt but not as bad as after Chase betrayed her. ‘Was it betrayal at all? He was drunk that night after all? A simple makeout session with a guy when he was drunk? Did it mean anything?’ She felt footsteps approach and she drew her swords and pointed it at the man’s throat. It was Chase.
Note from author: Well guys thats number 3… im still not happy with it but im hoping ur enjoying it! i will try to get better and better with Ru the expert helping me out! Still im trying to give every character a personality. Hope ur lovin it.. zuzu <3
Chapter 4
Yuffie had now been receiving more regular visits from William. Every time she asked him what he was doing there he would just say with a smirk, “You ARE the princess from our rival kingdom… Do you think you can be left unattended that long?” Yuffie had grown accustomed to William’s presence. She liked it when he smiled; he had a very unique smile. She had always know she liked him and last night it happened! He kissed her! Since then all she could think about was him. She heard the door handle turn and looked towards the door. William walked in, put the tray down and kissed her lightly on the cheek. “Hey,” he said
“Hey! How was your day?” Yuffie asked trying not to show too much excitement. Unfortunately she failed at that.
“Oh well we have this new prisoner that’s creating a lot of chaos. If he continues he’d probably be executed by the princess.”
“Oh I thought the princess was like all nice and goody goody and stuff…”
“Yeah well she was… Dunno what’s up and to tell you the truth I don’t care. The only thing I care about is you.” He leaned in for a kiss but then felt a hand grab him from behind and he was lifted into the air. A guard stood there, holding him from his collar and staring right into his eyes. “You know what the penalty for treachery is right? Making out with the sister of King Chase? And to think everyone here trusted you…” William tried to fight but this guy was twice his size.
William was dragged into the Princess’ throne room. She sat there, her legs crossed and her hands formed together as one fist. “What is it this time?” Angela asked.
“This guard was making out with a prisoner. He was kissing King Chase’s sister,” The guard replied. His grip on to William’s shoulder was as tight as ever.
Angela turned her gaze to William. “So you’re a traitor, huh? Tell me, is that so called girl more important to you then your allegiance to your nation?” William looked down. “Throw him in the dungeons and be off with his head tomorrow at dawn,” Angela announced. The other guard bowed and took William out of the room.
News of the traitor guard had spread through the whole prison and Yuffie was worried sick. It was all her fault and she knew it. She cried herself to sleep.
…………………….
Mimi just realized what she had done. In front of her was Nate who looked completely amused. She lowered her hand quickly and blushed slightly. “Well that was a nice way to say hello wasn’t it?” Nate said still grinning widely.
“Geez, you don’t have to rub it in. I was having a bad dream okay?” Mimi said, annoyed, “So why are you here anyway? After three whole years you wouldn’t possibly come to see me just because you missed me right?”
“William’s in trouble…”
“What’s wrong?! How do you know?”
“Shellfish has had telepathic connections with William. He will be executed from the order of Princess Madeline tomorrow morning,” Nate replied.
Willian her brother...that she hadn't seen for so long.. She recollected herself, “You don’t know yet do you? That’s not Princess Madeline its Angela from the above world.”
“Wait! How do you know about that? WTF is going on.”
“Let’s just say I know a lot of things…” She grabbed his hand, “Come on we have a life to save!”
Hey guys? Is it getting interesting now? Alex and Crazula have been mentioned in this one btw. Also chapter 5 is on very soon. chapter 4 was sooooooo long i had to divide it! so thats why chapter 4 is a bit empty without chapter 5.. anyway read this and ill get chapter 5 on soon! Enjoy xoxo Zuzu
This character guide is for everyone from Chatango (Guru’s chat and anime rumor):
Angela(avatarguru), Mimi(zuzu/zutarafirebendaluv), Valeria(Ruberry_muffin/Ru), Jack(kaiser123), Eminence(pigiwigi) Madeline(aqua111) Yuffie(darla1207) Chase(arielcom) Captain Fish(iamapa) Lisa (issadanielle) Shellfish (Crazula)
Chapter 1
This story is set under the sea (lalalala!). Angela is the princess of PUFFLANTA where she is respected by all in her nation! The truth is that she is a Ninja Pirate in disguise from the above world! Madeline the real princess of Pufflanta was kidnapped and held hostage under her bed, a place where no one would bother look! Jack a faithful and hunky sidekick of Angela was the one holding Madeline hostage. He had grown to like her and care for her but Madeline had hated him and the rest of his gang.
Eminence and Captain Fish, best friends of Madeline, were out in search for her when suddenly Captain Fish yelled, “OMG I FOUND HER!”
“Where?!” Eminence asked.
“Oh wait no it’s a just seaweed,”
Meanwhile at the palace Angela appointed a new knight called Valeria (who also had a burning hate for people called Emma). Little did Angela know that Valeria was actually a spy from their opposing kingdom of Toothpick land. Chase the much loved yet evil King of Toothpick Land had ordered Valeria his noble ‘female’ night to go and seek out information which would help him takeover.
In this chaos Yuffie the brave prince of toothpick realized that ‘he’ was not a prince but a princess! As this shocked her deeply and emotionally she decided to leave toothpick and go to Pufflanta. Hearing this news Lisa, who was Yuffie’s girlfriend went in to a state of depression…luckily someone was there for her….
When Yuffie approached the border of Pufflanta she was attacked by Mimi who though she was a monkey. As Yuffie ran for her life she ran straight into the hands of Jack! Jack threw her into the dungeons. While all this was happening Mimi watched quietly planning out for her next move. Little did anyone know Mimi was a secret detective from an unknown destination.
What is going to be Angela’s next move? Oh no is that rejection between Jack and Madeline and Why does Mimi hate monkeys???? Find out that and much more in the next editions of ‘What’s the name of this story?’
New Characters coming up later: Nate(darkalex) Shellfish (crazula) William (Goldenmunky)
Chapter 2
Yuffie sat in her prison cell crying and alone. What was left in this world for her now? Yuffie had never really loved Lisa, it was more a of a forced affection. The truth was Yuffie always knew she was a girl but her parents always raised her as a boy. Lisa was also introduced to Yuffie by her parents. Chase, Yuffie’s older brother, wasn’t the most reliable person in the world. He was just too busy executing people and trying to take over the sea. Yuffie understood that that was a really hard and difficult job but wouldn’t mind a little attention from her brother. The door handle to her dungeon turned and Yuffie lifted her gaze. In front of her stood the most handsome man she had ever seen.
Angela’s POV:
Angela sat in her throne thinking about what she would do with this throne once she became the queen. Hmm…. The Queen.. It sounded good.. but to become a queen she would need to find a man, and just any man wouldn’t do. But she was enjoying herself with the current amount of power. She was lucky to be a shape-shifter, she could change herself to look like anyone. It was great! The door opened and a few guards walked in and kneeled before her. How she’d never get sick of that.
Angela’s POV end..
“Princess Madeline, as u ordered we have blown up the surrounding 4 cities. What is your wish right now?” one of the guards asked
“Have you gotten my apple pie as I have ordered?” Angela asked.
“Yes Of Course!” One of the guards walked up to her and handed her the apple pie. She glared at the pie and then took a small bite.
She through the pie at the guards face, “How dare you serve me a cold apple pie! Don’t you know better! For this you will go to the dungeons!” She looked at the other guard who looked like he was about to wet his pants. “You there! Go bomb down some poor defenseless city and then report to me.”
Valeria was happy. It was a rare thing. The only thing that would make her happy would be seeing someone going through an immense amount of suffering. She was happy that she was going back to toothpick. She was happy that she was going back to Chase… The only thing on her mind since the makeout session was Chase… (Personal Note from the writer: AHAHAHAHA WOOT! :P)
Lisa sat in a corner of her room. Sobbing and regretting her relationship with Yuffie. Chase was taking his occasional prowl around the castle grinning to himself about another town he had taken over. This one put on a fight and it was always much more fun when the opposition went down in a fight. He stopped when he heard her crying from Lisa’s room. He entered the room. She sat there in the corner of the room crying. He knew what this was about. He knelt down beside her and looked at her. She looked back at him with red eyes. The thoughts in his head were going so fast he didn’t know what was happening. He looked in her eyes once more and without another thought dove into kiss her. Lisa pushed him away. He thought it was rejection until he saw Valeria standing at the door…
Note from author: Hey guys this one was a bit serious but i wanted to have a love triangle and so it needed to be serious but LOL! I love you guys and i promise next one is gonna be awesomely awesome. And im promising appearances of Mimi, Jack, Eminence, Madeline and Captain Fish in the next one. I still need to build up each character and yeah… and i dont know how to do love scenes LOL! i hate lovey dovey books.. anyway enjoy love zuzu
Chapter 3
Eminence sat in her room. She had looked every possible place that Madeline could be. Only she and Captain Fish knew that Angela was not the real Madeline. She was worried where her friend was. Where could she possibly be? They had looked in her closet, in the shower (the lady in there wacked Captain Fish across the head), on the roof, in the oven but there was no sign of her. Captain Fish had claimed to have seen her many times but it had turned out to be seaweed or slime. As Eminence was deep in thought Captain Fish came running into her room. “I think I know where she is!”
Eminence stood up, “WHERE!”
“We haven’t looked under her bed?!” Eminence stood up and hit captain fish over the head with a hand bag. He really did deserve it, really how stupid could someone get?
Yuffie was stunned at how handsome the man standing in front of her was. If she hadn’t been crying earlier she would probably be drooling. ‘Wait a few days ago I was a guy dating a girl, now I’m practically drooling over this guy? But if I was dating a girl would that make me a lesbian? Or now that I like this guy would I be gay? Or wait am I a bi?!’ She was practically screaming in her head.
The man walked in with a tray of food and put it right next to her. He sat down just staring at the girl. He though she was beautiful. ‘She has a very weird hairstyle though…’ he thought. He snapped out of it. “Here is your food,” He said in the most emotionless voice he could put together, “I am meant to stay here and keep watch while you eat,”
“Okay,” She whispered and looked down at her food.
“What’s your name?” He asked.
“Yuffie…”
‘Yuffie? So cute’ he thought, ‘Weird but it suits her’.
“What’s your name?” Yuffie asked.
“I’m William.” They continued talking about weird things such as dead turtles and flying sea pigs. When Yuffie finished her meal he walked out staring at her as he went but he walked straight into a wall.
“Yes,” Mimi said and hung up the phone. She sat down and sighed. ‘Finally a break…’ She sat down and drifted off to sleep. A few minutes later she woke, finding herself tied to a tree. She heard sounds. They were not just any sounds, they were monkey. Hundreds of monkey swung down from the branches, surrounding her from each corner. She felt a bolt of plasma building up in her fists as she broke free of the rope and punched the first monkey she saw in the face.
She woke up. It was a dream. Only then she realized that she had punched someone in the face, and it was someone she knew…
Valeria was furious. She had been betrayed. Betrayed by the only person she truly loved. She punched the wall in front of her as hard as she could. Her hand bled but she didn’t care. It hurt but not as bad as after Chase betrayed her. ‘Was it betrayal at all? He was drunk that night after all? A simple makeout session with a guy when he was drunk? Did it mean anything?’ She felt footsteps approach and she drew her swords and pointed it at the man’s throat. It was Chase.
Note from author: Well guys thats number 3… im still not happy with it but im hoping ur enjoying it! i will try to get better and better with Ru the expert helping me out! Still im trying to give every character a personality. Hope ur lovin it.. zuzu <3
Chapter 4
Yuffie had now been receiving more regular visits from William. Every time she asked him what he was doing there he would just say with a smirk, “You ARE the princess from our rival kingdom… Do you think you can be left unattended that long?” Yuffie had grown accustomed to William’s presence. She liked it when he smiled; he had a very unique smile. She had always know she liked him and last night it happened! He kissed her! Since then all she could think about was him. She heard the door handle turn and looked towards the door. William walked in, put the tray down and kissed her lightly on the cheek. “Hey,” he said
“Hey! How was your day?” Yuffie asked trying not to show too much excitement. Unfortunately she failed at that.
“Oh well we have this new prisoner that’s creating a lot of chaos. If he continues he’d probably be executed by the princess.”
“Oh I thought the princess was like all nice and goody goody and stuff…”
“Yeah well she was… Dunno what’s up and to tell you the truth I don’t care. The only thing I care about is you.” He leaned in for a kiss but then felt a hand grab him from behind and he was lifted into the air. A guard stood there, holding him from his collar and staring right into his eyes. “You know what the penalty for treachery is right? Making out with the sister of King Chase? And to think everyone here trusted you…” William tried to fight but this guy was twice his size.
William was dragged into the Princess’ throne room. She sat there, her legs crossed and her hands formed together as one fist. “What is it this time?” Angela asked.
“This guard was making out with a prisoner. He was kissing King Chase’s sister,” The guard replied. His grip on to William’s shoulder was as tight as ever.
Angela turned her gaze to William. “So you’re a traitor, huh? Tell me, is that so called girl more important to you then your allegiance to your nation?” William looked down. “Throw him in the dungeons and be off with his head tomorrow at dawn,” Angela announced. The other guard bowed and took William out of the room.
News of the traitor guard had spread through the whole prison and Yuffie was worried sick. It was all her fault and she knew it. She cried herself to sleep.
…………………….
Mimi just realized what she had done. In front of her was Nate who looked completely amused. She lowered her hand quickly and blushed slightly. “Well that was a nice way to say hello wasn’t it?” Nate said still grinning widely.
“Geez, you don’t have to rub it in. I was having a bad dream okay?” Mimi said, annoyed, “So why are you here anyway? After three whole years you wouldn’t possibly come to see me just because you missed me right?”
“William’s in trouble…”
“What’s wrong?! How do you know?”
“Shellfish has had telepathic connections with William. He will be executed from the order of Princess Madeline tomorrow morning,” Nate replied.
Willian her brother...that she hadn't seen for so long.. She recollected herself, “You don’t know yet do you? That’s not Princess Madeline its Angela from the above world.”
“Wait! How do you know about that? WTF is going on.”
“Let’s just say I know a lot of things…” She grabbed his hand, “Come on we have a life to save!”
Hey guys? Is it getting interesting now? Alex and Crazula have been mentioned in this one btw. Also chapter 5 is on very soon. chapter 4 was sooooooo long i had to divide it! so thats why chapter 4 is a bit empty without chapter 5.. anyway read this and ill get chapter 5 on soon! Enjoy xoxo Zuzu
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