Before i begin my story i would like to dedicate it to everyone on Guru’s chat especially Guru and the mods who this story is about! (Well not really about THEM)
This character guide is for everyone from Chatango (Guru’s chat and anime rumor):
Angela(avatarguru), Mimi(zuzu/zutarafirebendaluv), Valeria(Ruberry_muffin/Ru), Jack(kaiser123), Eminence(pigiwigi) Madeline(aqua111) Yuffie(darla1207) Chase(arielcom) Captain Fish(iamapa) Lisa (issadanielle) Shellfish (Crazula)
Chapter 1
This story is set under the sea (lalalala!). Angela is the princess of PUFFLANTA where she is respected by all in her nation! The truth is that she is a Ninja Pirate in disguise from the above world! Madeline the real princess of Pufflanta was kidnapped and held hostage under her bed, a place where no one would bother look! Jack a faithful and hunky sidekick of Angela was the one holding Madeline hostage. He had grown to like her and care for her but Madeline had hated him and the rest of his gang.
Eminence and Captain Fish, best friends of Madeline, were out in search for her when suddenly Captain Fish yelled, “OMG I FOUND HER!”
“Where?!” Eminence asked.
“Oh wait no it’s a just seaweed,”
Meanwhile at the palace Angela appointed a new knight called Valeria (who also had a burning hate for people called Emma). Little did Angela know that Valeria was actually a spy from their opposing kingdom of Toothpick land. Chase the much loved yet evil King of Toothpick Land had ordered Valeria his noble ‘female’ night to go and seek out information which would help him takeover.
In this chaos Yuffie the brave prince of toothpick realized that ‘he’ was not a prince but a princess! As this shocked her deeply and emotionally she decided to leave toothpick and go to Pufflanta. Hearing this news Lisa, who was Yuffie’s girlfriend went in to a state of depression…luckily someone was there for her….
When Yuffie approached the border of Pufflanta she was attacked by Mimi who though she was a monkey. As Yuffie ran for her life she ran straight into the hands of Jack! Jack threw her into the dungeons. While all this was happening Mimi watched quietly planning out for her next move. Little did anyone know Mimi was a secret detective from an unknown destination.
What is going to be Angela’s next move? Oh no is that rejection between Jack and Madeline and Why does Mimi hate monkeys???? Find out that and much more in the next editions of ‘What’s the name of this story?’
New Characters coming up later: Nate(darkalex) Shellfish (crazula) William (Goldenmunky)
Chapter 2
Yuffie sat in her prison cell crying and alone. What was left in this world for her now? Yuffie had never really loved Lisa, it was more a of a forced affection. The truth was Yuffie always knew she was a girl but her parents always raised her as a boy. Lisa was also introduced to Yuffie by her parents. Chase, Yuffie’s older brother, wasn’t the most reliable person in the world. He was just too busy executing people and trying to take over the sea. Yuffie understood that that was a really hard and difficult job but wouldn’t mind a little attention from her brother. The door handle to her dungeon turned and Yuffie lifted her gaze. In front of her stood the most handsome man she had ever seen.
Angela’s POV:
Angela sat in her throne thinking about what she would do with this throne once she became the queen. Hmm…. The Queen.. It sounded good.. but to become a queen she would need to find a man, and just any man wouldn’t do. But she was enjoying herself with the current amount of power. She was lucky to be a shape-shifter, she could change herself to look like anyone. It was great! The door opened and a few guards walked in and kneeled before her. How she’d never get sick of that.
Angela’s POV end..
“Princess Madeline, as u ordered we have blown up the surrounding 4 cities. What is your wish right now?” one of the guards asked
“Have you gotten my apple pie as I have ordered?” Angela asked.
“Yes Of Course!” One of the guards walked up to her and handed her the apple pie. She glared at the pie and then took a small bite.
She through the pie at the guards face, “How dare you serve me a cold apple pie! Don’t you know better! For this you will go to the dungeons!” She looked at the other guard who looked like he was about to wet his pants. “You there! Go bomb down some poor defenseless city and then report to me.”
Valeria was happy. It was a rare thing. The only thing that would make her happy would be seeing someone going through an immense amount of suffering. She was happy that she was going back to toothpick. She was happy that she was going back to Chase… The only thing on her mind since the makeout session was Chase… (Personal Note from the writer: AHAHAHAHA WOOT! :P)
Lisa sat in a corner of her room. Sobbing and regretting her relationship with Yuffie. Chase was taking his occasional prowl around the castle grinning to himself about another town he had taken over. This one put on a fight and it was always much more fun when the opposition went down in a fight. He stopped when he heard her crying from Lisa’s room. He entered the room. She sat there in the corner of the room crying. He knew what this was about. He knelt down beside her and looked at her. She looked back at him with red eyes. The thoughts in his head were going so fast he didn’t know what was happening. He looked in her eyes once more and without another thought dove into kiss her. Lisa pushed him away. He thought it was rejection until he saw Valeria standing at the door…
Note from author: Hey guys this one was a bit serious but i wanted to have a love triangle and so it needed to be serious but LOL! I love you guys and i promise next one is gonna be awesomely awesome. And im promising appearances of Mimi, Jack, Eminence, Madeline and Captain Fish in the next one. I still need to build up each character and yeah… and i dont know how to do love scenes LOL! i hate lovey dovey books.. anyway enjoy love zuzu
Chapter 3
Eminence sat in her room. She had looked every possible place that Madeline could be. Only she and Captain Fish knew that Angela was not the real Madeline. She was worried where her friend was. Where could she possibly be? They had looked in her closet, in the shower (the lady in there wacked Captain Fish across the head), on the roof, in the oven but there was no sign of her. Captain Fish had claimed to have seen her many times but it had turned out to be seaweed or slime. As Eminence was deep in thought Captain Fish came running into her room. “I think I know where she is!”
Eminence stood up, “WHERE!”
“We haven’t looked under her bed?!” Eminence stood up and hit captain fish over the head with a hand bag. He really did deserve it, really how stupid could someone get?
Yuffie was stunned at how handsome the man standing in front of her was. If she hadn’t been crying earlier she would probably be drooling. ‘Wait a few days ago I was a guy dating a girl, now I’m practically drooling over this guy? But if I was dating a girl would that make me a lesbian? Or now that I like this guy would I be gay? Or wait am I a bi?!’ She was practically screaming in her head.
The man walked in with a tray of food and put it right next to her. He sat down just staring at the girl. He though she was beautiful. ‘She has a very weird hairstyle though…’ he thought. He snapped out of it. “Here is your food,” He said in the most emotionless voice he could put together, “I am meant to stay here and keep watch while you eat,”
“Okay,” She whispered and looked down at her food.
“What’s your name?” He asked.
“Yuffie…”
‘Yuffie? So cute’ he thought, ‘Weird but it suits her’.
“What’s your name?” Yuffie asked.
“I’m William.” They continued talking about weird things such as dead turtles and flying sea pigs. When Yuffie finished her meal he walked out staring at her as he went but he walked straight into a wall.
“Yes,” Mimi said and hung up the phone. She sat down and sighed. ‘Finally a break…’ She sat down and drifted off to sleep. A few minutes later she woke, finding herself tied to a tree. She heard sounds. They were not just any sounds, they were monkey. Hundreds of monkey swung down from the branches, surrounding her from each corner. She felt a bolt of plasma building up in her fists as she broke free of the rope and punched the first monkey she saw in the face.
She woke up. It was a dream. Only then she realized that she had punched someone in the face, and it was someone she knew…
Valeria was furious. She had been betrayed. Betrayed by the only person she truly loved. She punched the wall in front of her as hard as she could. Her hand bled but she didn’t care. It hurt but not as bad as after Chase betrayed her. ‘Was it betrayal at all? He was drunk that night after all? A simple makeout session with a guy when he was drunk? Did it mean anything?’ She felt footsteps approach and she drew her swords and pointed it at the man’s throat. It was Chase.
Note from author: Well guys thats number 3… im still not happy with it but im hoping ur enjoying it! i will try to get better and better with Ru the expert helping me out! Still im trying to give every character a personality. Hope ur lovin it.. zuzu <3
Chapter 4
Yuffie had now been receiving more regular visits from William. Every time she asked him what he was doing there he would just say with a smirk, “You ARE the princess from our rival kingdom… Do you think you can be left unattended that long?” Yuffie had grown accustomed to William’s presence. She liked it when he smiled; he had a very unique smile. She had always know she liked him and last night it happened! He kissed her! Since then all she could think about was him. She heard the door handle turn and looked towards the door. William walked in, put the tray down and kissed her lightly on the cheek. “Hey,” he said
“Hey! How was your day?” Yuffie asked trying not to show too much excitement. Unfortunately she failed at that.
“Oh well we have this new prisoner that’s creating a lot of chaos. If he continues he’d probably be executed by the princess.”
“Oh I thought the princess was like all nice and goody goody and stuff…”
“Yeah well she was… Dunno what’s up and to tell you the truth I don’t care. The only thing I care about is you.” He leaned in for a kiss but then felt a hand grab him from behind and he was lifted into the air. A guard stood there, holding him from his collar and staring right into his eyes. “You know what the penalty for treachery is right? Making out with the sister of King Chase? And to think everyone here trusted you…” William tried to fight but this guy was twice his size.
William was dragged into the Princess’ throne room. She sat there, her legs crossed and her hands formed together as one fist. “What is it this time?” Angela asked.
“This guard was making out with a prisoner. He was kissing King Chase’s sister,” The guard replied. His grip on to William’s shoulder was as tight as ever.
Angela turned her gaze to William. “So you’re a traitor, huh? Tell me, is that so called girl more important to you then your allegiance to your nation?” William looked down. “Throw him in the dungeons and be off with his head tomorrow at dawn,” Angela announced. The other guard bowed and took William out of the room.
News of the traitor guard had spread through the whole prison and Yuffie was worried sick. It was all her fault and she knew it. She cried herself to sleep.
…………………….
Mimi just realized what she had done. In front of her was Nate who looked completely amused. She lowered her hand quickly and blushed slightly. “Well that was a nice way to say hello wasn’t it?” Nate said still grinning widely.
“Geez, you don’t have to rub it in. I was having a bad dream okay?” Mimi said, annoyed, “So why are you here anyway? After three whole years you wouldn’t possibly come to see me just because you missed me right?”
“William’s in trouble…”
“What’s wrong?! How do you know?”
“Shellfish has had telepathic connections with William. He will be executed from the order of Princess Madeline tomorrow morning,” Nate replied.
Willian her brother...that she hadn't seen for so long.. She recollected herself, “You don’t know yet do you? That’s not Princess Madeline its Angela from the above world.”
“Wait! How do you know about that? WTF is going on.”
“Let’s just say I know a lot of things…” She grabbed his hand, “Come on we have a life to save!”
Hey guys? Is it getting interesting now? Alex and Crazula have been mentioned in this one btw. Also chapter 5 is on very soon. chapter 4 was sooooooo long i had to divide it! so thats why chapter 4 is a bit empty without chapter 5.. anyway read this and ill get chapter 5 on soon! Enjoy xoxo Zuzu
Saturday, November 8, 2008
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